*appears*

here's another poem


A shadow's life

shadows, on a lost plane
dances, in the starlit night
moving about like a wild
fire, buring in a deep forest

when the starlight dims
the shadow fades out like
the light of a snuffed out candle
at the end of a long night

But when the stars shine again
the sadow comes out
and frolics about in joy
for life is just a simple shadow


Fin
what ya think

That was realy nice xio, it gave me a vivid image in my head.

Also, you could have posted both your poems in one thred. But its ok for now.

mint, this has to be moved to the fiction forum, along with the other poem :)

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Moving to Fiction & Poetry.. ^_^
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both of your poems are really nice man. I didn't know you could write. They got a distinct style to them that's really cool.:cool: