ChaosPhoenix
04-30-2002, 09:43 AM
This is one of the best fanfictions that I have read on Final Fantasy ever.
I'm not joking.
It's not by me - I have not written this at all. However, the person who has written it has given me permission to post this (he can't be bothered to do it himself!)
Read and enjoy, and feel free to post what you think.
There are no original FF characters in it, but it is set in the FF world..
This is the first part, it runs into quite a few. I'll post the others if I get enough interest...
These are his notes...
Just a few notes about this story before I start:
(1) This story has the characteristics mainly of FF8 and FF10. What that means is that the characters have their own abilities and skills acorrding to their class and not materia like FF 7.
(2) The characters will each have their own Aeon. Aeons are the same as Guardian Forces and Summons.
(3) I debated whether or not to have the cure magic present. Why? Because it would be all too easy if everyone was cured after every battle and there is no sense of danger. So cure is there BUT it is a double-edged thing. It can either help a wound or make it worse. Oh and no potions or phoenix downs either.
Part 1: "Battle of the Aeons"
Bray raced through the forest, side-stepping past trees and ducking under branches as he went. The wind rushed to meet his face as he accelerated and jumped over a small rock in his path. His sword trailed behind him as he ran, slightly scraping against the ground now and again. Up ahead he could make out a clearing and the trees suddenly thinned. He began to slow and then cautiously walked out to the edge of the clearing.
It was mid-day and the sun was slowly making its way west. It gave out a warm glow as few clouds floated by. Bray walked forward and slowly went over to the edge of the hill. He crouched and looked down. He could see for miles from here. Far below he could make out a city. It looked almost lifeless, deserted. Not far from the city he could see some monsters roaming around in the fields searching for a meal.
A flicker of darkness blocked out the light of the sun momentarily and he looked up. Bray tensed. A huge winged dragon was flying high above, it had passed directly under the sun, and flew downwards scanning the fields. It was a magnificent creature. Its wingspan was huge and it had a deadly air about it.
So, this is what has been terrorising the villagers.
Bray watched the dragon as it spotted the monsters and then scooped down low. It landed a few feet away from them and roared. The roar resounded around the whole area and Bray was amazed that he could hear it from way up here. The monsters circled the dragon, sizing it up. One was a Zuu. A large cumbersome bird with a large beak and the other was a Blazer Beetle.
The Blazer Beetle was the first to strike. It reached out with its claws to attack. The dragon easily evaded it by taking to the air. The Zuu followed. The Dragon breathed deeply and then flames began to flicker around its mouth. It released a stream of fire frying the bird. The Zuu let out a huge cry of pain and then fell to the ground. The dragon quickly swooped down and picked up the Blazer Beetle with its feet. It flew up high, dispersing several clouds as it went, and then let it go.
The monster screamed an otherworldly cry as it fell through the sky. As it hit the ground it crushed sending blood and guts outwards. The dragon roared a victory cry. As Bray watched he noticed that something was different about this creature. It just looked and felt different than any monster that he had encountered before.
Bray shook his head. He had been tracking it for several days now and was not sure if he could take him on. The dragon was very powerful and armed only with a sword Bray was not sure that he could win. But then again the dragon was not causing anyone harm. It just flew through the countryside and battled a few monsters as it went.
But the villagers would not accept just letting it be. They were frightened. Scared that it would one day attack and kill them all like the other monsters populating this world. They said that it was just biding its time. That�s why they had hired him. Bray was a mercenary. Willing to be hired to clear away a few monsters or aid in a short war ... but for a price.
The villagers were offering him 3000 gold coins plus food and water. It was an offer that he could not resist. But now, as he watched the monster, he wondered if he should do it. Suddenly Bray spotted something out of the corner of his eye. He turned and saw a small figure standing out in a few fields away from the monster. Bray strained his eyes and could make out that it was a woman.
The dragon had also spotted the woman and flew towards her. Bray's heart stopped. It's going to attack her! Jumping, Bray slid down the side of the hill, he reached the bottom and rolled out of it. Getting straight back up he ran as fast as he could towards them.
As he got nearer Bray saw that the dragon landed a mile away from the woman. He watched as the woman calmly held what looked like a short spear outwards horizontally in one hand. Closer still he could make out her face. She was beautiful, with soft delicate features and thin lips, and her hair was in Zulu knots. She wore a feathery coat that was blue and a chain of sorts around her neck.
The dragon did not move. It just stared strangely at her. Almost out of breath, Bray reached the field. The woman saw him but then turned back her attention to the dragon. The dragon ignored him also.
Where is he?
Bray heard a voice as it pounded deep in his head. It was very loud and clear but looking around Bray did not see anyone else who could have spoken.
"You want to fight?" Asked the woman calmly. "Why?"
It's in my nature. I must fight. Prove yourself to me and I will become your Aeon.
Bray stared at the dragon. He was not sure how but it was the dragon that he was hearing in his very thoughts. He turned to the woman but she was still calm.
Aeon? Bray had heard that word before but was shocked at the thought of it. He then watched as her features turned hard and the image of a strong woman appeared.
"Then so be it, Bahamut."
She took a step back and the dragon took to the sky. She closed her eyes and then held the spear aloft. Green orbs appeared and floated around her.
Valefor!
The orbs disappeared as fast as it had arrived. Suddenly a soft blue aura appeared underneath her and grew to form a blazing symbol on the grass. Four blue lights erupted from the symbol and shot up to the sky. There was a cry and a huge bird-type creature appeared from out of the clouds. The creature landed beside the woman and stared at Bahamut.
Bray looked on in shock. "A � An Aeon?!"
Valefor had huge curved wings. It looked somehow bird-like and had a long flowing head dress and tail. Two curved apertures stood out from its chest and a small bell hung from one of them. The woman smiled and patted the Aeon.
Aeons. Bray knew only a little about them. They were creatures that abide in an altered state to this world venturing into our own now and again. They would sometimes allow themselves to help certain humans if they liked them or if they were worthy enough. It seemed that this woman, whoever she was, could summon Aeons. Bray looked at the dragon. He must be an Aeon too.
Show me what you've got!
With a flap of its wings the dragon jetted towards Valefor. Valefor took to the air also and calmly waited. Bahamut quickly bridged the gap between them with incredible speed and was almost upon them when the woman shouted.
"Now, Valefor!"
A soft blue light began to emit from Valefor. He drew back his wings and then shot them forward with all his might. A huge sonic gust of air shot outwards. It hit Bahamut square on and sent him off course. Bahamut shook his head and circled, he prepared for another charge. Valefor charged also. Bahamut waited until the last second and then flew slightly upwards. He grabbed Valefor with his claws and then drove him into the ground.
Valefor cried out in pain. He slowly tried to get up. Bahamut did not give him the chance. He rose up high and then energy began to gather around his mouth.
"Oh no!" Shouted the woman. "Mega Flare! Valefor get up!"
The energy continued to gather until it was almost blinding to look at. A screeching sound invaded their ears and they tried to cover them. The woman ran towards Bray and grabbed his hand as she passed by.
"Run!"
Bahamut released the energy. A powerful stream of blue energy shot down from his mouth and towards Valefor. It hit him and a huge explosion filled the entire surrounding area. Bray and the woman were hurled to the ground by the shock wave. They slowly turned to see Bahamut roaring. The woman ran over to where Valefor last was. Bray followed.
As the smoke cleared Bray almost fell. A huge crater had been marked into the field. In its centre was a bruised and bloodied Valefor. She ran down the side of the crater and to her Aeon.
"Valefor!"
She quickly knelt beside him and examined his injuries. He was hurt really badly. She calmed herself and then held out her hands, hovering just above his chest.
Cure!
A soft green light began to emit from her hands and a glow surrounded the Aeon. She felt her energy flow out to the creature. Bray saw the Aeon slowly open its eyes as some of its energy returned.
"You're a white mage?" Asked Bray.
She nodded but kept her full attention on Valefor. After a moment she pulled away and the glow faded. She slumped, her energy drained.
"It worked! You need to rest Valefor. But you are going to be ok. You fought well."
Valefor roared and then began to fade. It disappeared into thin air.
They both turned as Bahamut roared. That was too easy. I have not fought a proper battle in a long time. Is no creature worthy of my time. He turned towards them. Or maybe a human would offer up a better challenge.
They both looked at each other. Bahamut flew towards them and landed just in front of them in the crater.
"Stand back." Bray warned the woman. "I'll have to fight him."
The dragon laughed. You? Ha ha haa! Neither one of you have the power to come up against me!
Bray raised his sword. "If you come any closer then I will try!"
Bray began to shake. He shuddered as he watched the powerful Aeon look at him weirdly. He shook the feeling off and got into his battle stance. A smile appeared on the dragon's lips.
Hhhmm. I sense something strange about you. Maybe you are the one? He glared hard at Bray. I will become your Aeon.
"You will?!" Bray answered in shock.
Yes. This should prove very interesting. He roared again and then began to fade and disappeared. When you need help summon me and I will appear.
Bray relaxed and put down his sword. He wiped the sweat from his forehead. He suddenly remembered and turned around to the woman. She was watching him with some interesting and then smiled.
"Wow. Such courage. He could have killed us both instantly if he wanted to."
Bray smiled back. "Thank god he didn't ... I can't believe it. Aeons! I though that they were only legend until now. And you can summon one." Bray shook his head. "Amazing. And a white mage to boot. I'm Bray, by the way."
The woman took his hand and they shaked. "Hi. I'm Amber."
"Amber? That�s a beautiful name."
She smiled. Bray looked around nervously. "D � Do you live far from here. I could walk you home if you'd like. Its not safe."
"I can take care of myself." She turned and started to walk. "But it�s a long walk. I could do with the company."
Bray smiled and jogged up to her. They climbed out of the crater and headed towards the city that Bray had spotted earlier. They talked about many things. He listened as Amber told him of her struggle to help the people in the city lead a normal life. Of the effect that the virus and the monsters had had on her life, and the death of some of her close friends.
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A young man watched from the distance. He held in his hand a strange sword. The hilt was circular and without the usually T-handle and it had a long but thick blade. The blade was adorned with strange symbols. He watched as a man in a white robe walked into a cave with blue-robes right behind.
The man in the white robe held a torch up high. It lit the entire area and cast flickering lights off of the tunnel's walls. He walked forward and several blue robed men followed after him. They travelled deep into the cave with the torch lighting their way. The tunnel soon opened up and they came to a big cavern. In the centre of the cavern was a stone alter with a body on top of it.
"The day is finally drawing near."
They turned to see a woman enter the cavern from a side tunnel. She had purple hair and was dressed all in blue. In her arms she held a baby. The man turned and they all bowed to her.
"Supreme Mother. You grace us with your presence."
She smiled a cruel wicked smile. "Thank you Guardian." She turned to look at the body on the alter. "I can not wait! Zoot will soon rise up again and lay claim to this world! He will be reunited with me ... and with his daughter, Brady."
"Zoot be praised! Zoot be praised!" The chosen cried out.
The Guardian went up and knelt beside the alter. "It's just a matter of time. Zoot will rise again!"
See - I told you it was good!
:D :D :D
I'm not joking.
It's not by me - I have not written this at all. However, the person who has written it has given me permission to post this (he can't be bothered to do it himself!)
Read and enjoy, and feel free to post what you think.
There are no original FF characters in it, but it is set in the FF world..
This is the first part, it runs into quite a few. I'll post the others if I get enough interest...
These are his notes...
Just a few notes about this story before I start:
(1) This story has the characteristics mainly of FF8 and FF10. What that means is that the characters have their own abilities and skills acorrding to their class and not materia like FF 7.
(2) The characters will each have their own Aeon. Aeons are the same as Guardian Forces and Summons.
(3) I debated whether or not to have the cure magic present. Why? Because it would be all too easy if everyone was cured after every battle and there is no sense of danger. So cure is there BUT it is a double-edged thing. It can either help a wound or make it worse. Oh and no potions or phoenix downs either.
Part 1: "Battle of the Aeons"
Bray raced through the forest, side-stepping past trees and ducking under branches as he went. The wind rushed to meet his face as he accelerated and jumped over a small rock in his path. His sword trailed behind him as he ran, slightly scraping against the ground now and again. Up ahead he could make out a clearing and the trees suddenly thinned. He began to slow and then cautiously walked out to the edge of the clearing.
It was mid-day and the sun was slowly making its way west. It gave out a warm glow as few clouds floated by. Bray walked forward and slowly went over to the edge of the hill. He crouched and looked down. He could see for miles from here. Far below he could make out a city. It looked almost lifeless, deserted. Not far from the city he could see some monsters roaming around in the fields searching for a meal.
A flicker of darkness blocked out the light of the sun momentarily and he looked up. Bray tensed. A huge winged dragon was flying high above, it had passed directly under the sun, and flew downwards scanning the fields. It was a magnificent creature. Its wingspan was huge and it had a deadly air about it.
So, this is what has been terrorising the villagers.
Bray watched the dragon as it spotted the monsters and then scooped down low. It landed a few feet away from them and roared. The roar resounded around the whole area and Bray was amazed that he could hear it from way up here. The monsters circled the dragon, sizing it up. One was a Zuu. A large cumbersome bird with a large beak and the other was a Blazer Beetle.
The Blazer Beetle was the first to strike. It reached out with its claws to attack. The dragon easily evaded it by taking to the air. The Zuu followed. The Dragon breathed deeply and then flames began to flicker around its mouth. It released a stream of fire frying the bird. The Zuu let out a huge cry of pain and then fell to the ground. The dragon quickly swooped down and picked up the Blazer Beetle with its feet. It flew up high, dispersing several clouds as it went, and then let it go.
The monster screamed an otherworldly cry as it fell through the sky. As it hit the ground it crushed sending blood and guts outwards. The dragon roared a victory cry. As Bray watched he noticed that something was different about this creature. It just looked and felt different than any monster that he had encountered before.
Bray shook his head. He had been tracking it for several days now and was not sure if he could take him on. The dragon was very powerful and armed only with a sword Bray was not sure that he could win. But then again the dragon was not causing anyone harm. It just flew through the countryside and battled a few monsters as it went.
But the villagers would not accept just letting it be. They were frightened. Scared that it would one day attack and kill them all like the other monsters populating this world. They said that it was just biding its time. That�s why they had hired him. Bray was a mercenary. Willing to be hired to clear away a few monsters or aid in a short war ... but for a price.
The villagers were offering him 3000 gold coins plus food and water. It was an offer that he could not resist. But now, as he watched the monster, he wondered if he should do it. Suddenly Bray spotted something out of the corner of his eye. He turned and saw a small figure standing out in a few fields away from the monster. Bray strained his eyes and could make out that it was a woman.
The dragon had also spotted the woman and flew towards her. Bray's heart stopped. It's going to attack her! Jumping, Bray slid down the side of the hill, he reached the bottom and rolled out of it. Getting straight back up he ran as fast as he could towards them.
As he got nearer Bray saw that the dragon landed a mile away from the woman. He watched as the woman calmly held what looked like a short spear outwards horizontally in one hand. Closer still he could make out her face. She was beautiful, with soft delicate features and thin lips, and her hair was in Zulu knots. She wore a feathery coat that was blue and a chain of sorts around her neck.
The dragon did not move. It just stared strangely at her. Almost out of breath, Bray reached the field. The woman saw him but then turned back her attention to the dragon. The dragon ignored him also.
Where is he?
Bray heard a voice as it pounded deep in his head. It was very loud and clear but looking around Bray did not see anyone else who could have spoken.
"You want to fight?" Asked the woman calmly. "Why?"
It's in my nature. I must fight. Prove yourself to me and I will become your Aeon.
Bray stared at the dragon. He was not sure how but it was the dragon that he was hearing in his very thoughts. He turned to the woman but she was still calm.
Aeon? Bray had heard that word before but was shocked at the thought of it. He then watched as her features turned hard and the image of a strong woman appeared.
"Then so be it, Bahamut."
She took a step back and the dragon took to the sky. She closed her eyes and then held the spear aloft. Green orbs appeared and floated around her.
Valefor!
The orbs disappeared as fast as it had arrived. Suddenly a soft blue aura appeared underneath her and grew to form a blazing symbol on the grass. Four blue lights erupted from the symbol and shot up to the sky. There was a cry and a huge bird-type creature appeared from out of the clouds. The creature landed beside the woman and stared at Bahamut.
Bray looked on in shock. "A � An Aeon?!"
Valefor had huge curved wings. It looked somehow bird-like and had a long flowing head dress and tail. Two curved apertures stood out from its chest and a small bell hung from one of them. The woman smiled and patted the Aeon.
Aeons. Bray knew only a little about them. They were creatures that abide in an altered state to this world venturing into our own now and again. They would sometimes allow themselves to help certain humans if they liked them or if they were worthy enough. It seemed that this woman, whoever she was, could summon Aeons. Bray looked at the dragon. He must be an Aeon too.
Show me what you've got!
With a flap of its wings the dragon jetted towards Valefor. Valefor took to the air also and calmly waited. Bahamut quickly bridged the gap between them with incredible speed and was almost upon them when the woman shouted.
"Now, Valefor!"
A soft blue light began to emit from Valefor. He drew back his wings and then shot them forward with all his might. A huge sonic gust of air shot outwards. It hit Bahamut square on and sent him off course. Bahamut shook his head and circled, he prepared for another charge. Valefor charged also. Bahamut waited until the last second and then flew slightly upwards. He grabbed Valefor with his claws and then drove him into the ground.
Valefor cried out in pain. He slowly tried to get up. Bahamut did not give him the chance. He rose up high and then energy began to gather around his mouth.
"Oh no!" Shouted the woman. "Mega Flare! Valefor get up!"
The energy continued to gather until it was almost blinding to look at. A screeching sound invaded their ears and they tried to cover them. The woman ran towards Bray and grabbed his hand as she passed by.
"Run!"
Bahamut released the energy. A powerful stream of blue energy shot down from his mouth and towards Valefor. It hit him and a huge explosion filled the entire surrounding area. Bray and the woman were hurled to the ground by the shock wave. They slowly turned to see Bahamut roaring. The woman ran over to where Valefor last was. Bray followed.
As the smoke cleared Bray almost fell. A huge crater had been marked into the field. In its centre was a bruised and bloodied Valefor. She ran down the side of the crater and to her Aeon.
"Valefor!"
She quickly knelt beside him and examined his injuries. He was hurt really badly. She calmed herself and then held out her hands, hovering just above his chest.
Cure!
A soft green light began to emit from her hands and a glow surrounded the Aeon. She felt her energy flow out to the creature. Bray saw the Aeon slowly open its eyes as some of its energy returned.
"You're a white mage?" Asked Bray.
She nodded but kept her full attention on Valefor. After a moment she pulled away and the glow faded. She slumped, her energy drained.
"It worked! You need to rest Valefor. But you are going to be ok. You fought well."
Valefor roared and then began to fade. It disappeared into thin air.
They both turned as Bahamut roared. That was too easy. I have not fought a proper battle in a long time. Is no creature worthy of my time. He turned towards them. Or maybe a human would offer up a better challenge.
They both looked at each other. Bahamut flew towards them and landed just in front of them in the crater.
"Stand back." Bray warned the woman. "I'll have to fight him."
The dragon laughed. You? Ha ha haa! Neither one of you have the power to come up against me!
Bray raised his sword. "If you come any closer then I will try!"
Bray began to shake. He shuddered as he watched the powerful Aeon look at him weirdly. He shook the feeling off and got into his battle stance. A smile appeared on the dragon's lips.
Hhhmm. I sense something strange about you. Maybe you are the one? He glared hard at Bray. I will become your Aeon.
"You will?!" Bray answered in shock.
Yes. This should prove very interesting. He roared again and then began to fade and disappeared. When you need help summon me and I will appear.
Bray relaxed and put down his sword. He wiped the sweat from his forehead. He suddenly remembered and turned around to the woman. She was watching him with some interesting and then smiled.
"Wow. Such courage. He could have killed us both instantly if he wanted to."
Bray smiled back. "Thank god he didn't ... I can't believe it. Aeons! I though that they were only legend until now. And you can summon one." Bray shook his head. "Amazing. And a white mage to boot. I'm Bray, by the way."
The woman took his hand and they shaked. "Hi. I'm Amber."
"Amber? That�s a beautiful name."
She smiled. Bray looked around nervously. "D � Do you live far from here. I could walk you home if you'd like. Its not safe."
"I can take care of myself." She turned and started to walk. "But it�s a long walk. I could do with the company."
Bray smiled and jogged up to her. They climbed out of the crater and headed towards the city that Bray had spotted earlier. They talked about many things. He listened as Amber told him of her struggle to help the people in the city lead a normal life. Of the effect that the virus and the monsters had had on her life, and the death of some of her close friends.
-------------
A young man watched from the distance. He held in his hand a strange sword. The hilt was circular and without the usually T-handle and it had a long but thick blade. The blade was adorned with strange symbols. He watched as a man in a white robe walked into a cave with blue-robes right behind.
The man in the white robe held a torch up high. It lit the entire area and cast flickering lights off of the tunnel's walls. He walked forward and several blue robed men followed after him. They travelled deep into the cave with the torch lighting their way. The tunnel soon opened up and they came to a big cavern. In the centre of the cavern was a stone alter with a body on top of it.
"The day is finally drawing near."
They turned to see a woman enter the cavern from a side tunnel. She had purple hair and was dressed all in blue. In her arms she held a baby. The man turned and they all bowed to her.
"Supreme Mother. You grace us with your presence."
She smiled a cruel wicked smile. "Thank you Guardian." She turned to look at the body on the alter. "I can not wait! Zoot will soon rise up again and lay claim to this world! He will be reunited with me ... and with his daughter, Brady."
"Zoot be praised! Zoot be praised!" The chosen cried out.
The Guardian went up and knelt beside the alter. "It's just a matter of time. Zoot will rise again!"
See - I told you it was good!
:D :D :D