I smile, as her blood runs down my hand,
it drips, so quietly, into the parched sand...
And I kiss her, my love, as she leaves this life...
now mine forever... now for eternity, my wife...

I laugh as we dance,
under this dead crimson moon,
the foxtrot, a tango,
a bloody monsoon,
she's in tatters, she's gone,
she won't dance for long...
But I laugh and I cry,
for the right I have wronged...

She's gone but she's mine,
no one else can have her...
she's so lost, yet divine...
all mine to savour...

And as the tide flees us,
and it's shining red,
I lay with her, on the beach...
on our death bed...

I fling my bloodied liberator,
far out into the sea,
freedom it shall have,
but not my beauty...

For forever, and forevermore,
she shall always be mine,
as we drift under the waves,
and the reddish bloodied brine...

And I cannot stop laughing,
as we roll towards our end,
I giggle as I kiss her,
in the waves, we blend.

I close my eyes,
for eternity,
dear it's just you and me...
And I give her my last breath,
as we're born in the bloodied sea.

Again, another great peice. But it worrys me, MC. Is this based of your life? Do you have these kind of troubles in your own life?

If so, that must be horrible...please contact me if you need someone to talk to it about..

But if not, great! Excellent! More, more! :D

Muahaha, I write all of this based off nothing more than pure angst and imagination! My life is awesome right now ^^

AMAZING! I wish i could write like that...i can't spell or make things rhyme. All the stuff i write is very sick and twisted. Bit like me really!:D But really that is some really deep stuff. I love it. you have to write alot more!:D ;)