laviathon
01-22-2008, 01:17 AM
All i see is you,
Your laugh, your glance, your smile,
And then i remeber what you put me through,
You played with me as a child.
You stab away at my heart,
With you unyielding pin,
You look at me, as were finally apart,
With an everlasting grin.
That little tiny pin,
That represents your hate,
has bled out all my sins,
and concluded my fate.
Hey, first time writer. i like critisism, so hack away at mine, but Prack try and be nice lol
Your laugh, your glance, your smile,
And then i remeber what you put me through,
You played with me as a child.
You stab away at my heart,
With you unyielding pin,
You look at me, as were finally apart,
With an everlasting grin.
That little tiny pin,
That represents your hate,
has bled out all my sins,
and concluded my fate.
Hey, first time writer. i like critisism, so hack away at mine, but Prack try and be nice lol