I love you

By: Allen Schezar

I love you.
I adore you.
I want to be with you.

I want to spend every
waking moment with
you.

I love you.
I adore you.
I want to be with you.

My lost love is found
now. I believe that you
came from above.

I love you.
I adore you.
Iwant to be with you.
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So what do you think?

Hey Allen. . . I read this in 3rd period yesterday. . . *slaps you on the back of your head* I thought you were gunna make it longer!

Well. . . ish good anywayse! Keep up the good work! :D

I'm the first to admit that I'm not a big fan of mushy poetry. Feel free to slug me if you ever catch me writing something like this. But this is still very well written. Good job. Don't listen to a heartless bitch like me. ;)

Thanks for the feedback.

Thsi is one of my songs that I had written when I was eight years old.

Dream Lover

Dream Lover lover
Dream Lover lover.

I love to dream.
I dream of you.
I dream that I am with you.

Dream Lover lover
Dream Lover lover.

I only dream of being with you.
I dream that you are the only for me.

Draem Lover lover
Dream Lover lover.

I love dream of you
To dream of you is my only wish.


That is it.

Nice Allen. Awww. . . "Dream Lover" is very cute. I like it. :D

That sounds like a nice song. I wish I could hear it so I would know how it goes.
Well I know you want to know what you could work on, but the only thing that comes to my mind is that your songs and poems should be a little longer. Other than that, they're great. ^_^

Keep it up. :)

Thanx I b back to post a new poem/song.

I rilly like your work :D

Ho, you wrote that at 8? Very, very, touching. ;D Keep it up Allen!

Thanks here is a song that I had written when I was in my 3rd period class.

Mystic love

I walk to the past,
So I can see you again.

Love, My mystic love.

You are my dream lady,
You are my mystic love.

Love, My mystic love.

It�s like my soul is burning
When I think of you baby.

Love, My mystic love

You are the lady for
Me.

Love, My mystic love.

You know I love you with all
my heart baby.

Love, My mystic love.

You touch that fire
That burns all my every desire
You melt that charm,

I have deep within me
Turn my frowns upside down
Take me to exactly Turning me,
Loving you eternally.

Love, My mystic love.

I swear upon that is good,
I will protect you o the end
of all time.

Love, My mystic love.

When I look into your eyes
I see our future baby.

Love, My mystic love.

repetition seems to be a strong point of yours, I like the latest one, its a strong one that fills the mind with dreams, good work

Oh wow...i dunno what to say. I think your song was great. Good job. ^_^

Thanx very much for your feedback without I dont know if I am doing good or bad and very much thanx to Tifa, Deus, Prinsesa, Christopher, and the most important one of all is Setsuna Yuna.

DREAMS
To dream is to dream of
one whom you love.
You know I love you with all
my heart baby.

I have deep within me
Turn my frowns upside down
Take me to exactly Turning me,
Loving you eternally.

I love dream of you
To dream is my only wish.

My lost love is found
now. I believe that you
came from above.

Dreams Lives on in
every one in encluding
The one Ilove the most.

By: Allen Schezar

A brand new poem from the heart.

Aching Soul

My life isn�t complete without you
In my life.

My soul is aching from the thought of missing you,
I am always thinking of you and your
Beautiful eyes looking in mine.

You are my one true love,
Your love is what I care from you.

My heart aches in pain,
Because I am constantly in
love with you.

My heart will forever keep you there,
Till we can be together.

Allen, is THIS what you were bugging me about in 4th period?

. . . *sighs* Well, I'm glad I didn't read it then because it would have ruined . . . the reading. Erm, yeah.

It's a great song, as your work always is. Keep it up Stephen! ^___^