-Deleted because apparently I'm not going to get any serious comments that have anything to do with my writing.-

ITS NOT BAD AT ALL im a poet myself. i can post a few of mine sometime if you wouldnt mind reading them.

here is a poem i wrote just now

When you need a friend
When you cereal's low
When you need to see the stars
When you just need to go!
Oh, captain my captain!
Please help our dance!
Don't eat it with milk!
Eat it for France!

Captain Crunch! All for me!

Heres my poem:

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue.......

You know the rest LOL

i may post mine but i dont like people to steal them and use then for there girlfriends. but ill post sum any way, just gimme a min to find my notebook.

i may post mine but i dont like people to steal them and use then for there girlfriends.

I doubt that'll be a problem.

you sayin i suck at what i...kinda do? cuz'a dont, i just ;ike whats mine to stay mine, is all.

you sayin i suck at what i...kinda do? cuz'a dont, i just ;ike whats mine to stay mine, is all.

Just sayin, I don't think anyone will steal your poetry around here and use it on their girlfriend. The major lack of people with girlfriends here alone is enough to support that statement.

LOL yeah that maybe true, i just have to find time to put up one that i like, i only really get small amounts of time to eve reply to the threads i read, so ill have to see.

here is a poem i wrote just now

When you need a friend
When you cereal's low
When you need to see the stars
When you just need to go!
Oh, captain my captain!
Please help our dance!
Don't eat it with milk!
Eat it for France!

Captain Crunch! All for me!

random-tastic

*borat* I LIKE!