RATED R!






What Lust Can Do To A Man

a hip young girl
I saw last week
in tight blue jeans
and matching tee

is naked now
in front of me
spent of all her
energy.

a smile plays across
my face,
for something beautiful
just took place


a week ago
I saw her there
and kidnapped her,
fucked her,
starved her,
killed her.
Fucked her;
now here we
are naked, alone
and embraced
closer then two
spoons stacked.

and i kiss her
softly
and a smile
plays across
my face.




(you love it)

You frighten me.

Same here!

boo

You make Olde seem moderate. :(

dude seek help.

it poetry, not reality. everyone calm down. read some bukowski and maybe you'll understand.

I know but still.

haha

well, it got the reaction I suppose I should have anticipated. You should have seen the looks on the faces in my creative writing class.

Am I the only one who thinks this is a work of sheer brilliance?

I vote The Chocobo Knight as the official FFShrine Poet Laureate, that was amazing.

ha, thanks guys. there's more. and it's crazier.

am i the only one who can take a blatant joke? thats pretty funny.

um...if you killed her mid way , thats sick, do the killing last, dont rape dead chicks,'
but hey, what ever works,
very interesting.

yes its the height of ignorance to rape someone "after" killing them. some people just make me sick!

dead chicks dont say no.

um...if you killed her mid way , thats sick, do the killing last, dont rape dead chicks,'
but hey, what ever works,
very interesting.

Oh my God, the ignorance.

Gotta watch out for those Chocobo Knights.

whoa, thats hardcore.

that was an intelligent poem. you captured the essence of lust perfectly.

That's hawt...

Prak is right. I love Prak.

That's wow.

You have the best name eva.