how for the sorrow,
I long for you,
cry to blue,
I may never know were I belong in thou heart,
but then if i try,
I'll overcome the odds,
no matter the hardship
I'll long for you,
towards dawn,
and the light of a thousand jewels,
I see you,
as it alightens your hair,
and as your eyes shine like water from the heavens,
I long for you.

My God, that is horrific.

i agree, my poem sucks...

I am starting to like this part of the forum.

Lord...

*Runs away crying*

I visit the poetry section just to read Prak's smackdowns... I don't even read the poems first anymore!

i'm not sure I would ever post poetry in this section. Bukowski could post and people would rip him down. Not exactly a creative enviorment.

ah what the fuck, I'm going to go post one anyways.

meh,,,,,if i was capable, id teach prakfart a lesson or two

meh,,,,,if i was capable, id teach prakfart a lesson or two

doubtful

meh,,,,,if i was capable, id teach prakfart a lesson or two

I cannot even begin to explain how many levels of retardation this post spawned from.