Elle
01-04-2007, 02:57 PM
If I cry
no one will see my tears

If I laugh
no one will notice my smile

If I'm in pain
no one will notice my suffering

But

If I fart
just once
they all will notice

Prak
01-04-2007, 03:06 PM
Laffo

Lukey
01-04-2007, 03:10 PM
;_;

that was beautiful

barretboy14
01-04-2007, 05:34 PM
Haha, :-[

Jarosik
01-04-2007, 05:38 PM
Gr9! :)

TK
01-06-2007, 11:04 PM
I was going to criticize this until I got to the end, where it became fantastic.

Mailbox
01-07-2007, 08:08 AM
I was going to criticize this until I got to the end, where it became fantastic.

DestroytheMap
01-07-2007, 08:44 AM
I was going to criticize this until I got to the end, where it became fantastic.

Haha, I felt much the same. Nice little twist on the typical "no one cares" poem.