Shadowblade
10-18-2006, 05:22 AM
Little something I've been writing. Crits always welcome.
Chapter One
This was the only time he felt really, truly alive, with Death grinning madly in his face. And as the bullets and debris danced about him in a frenzied whirlwind, he could've been looking into a mirror. He grinned as well.
“Verify the target!” a voice yelled out frantically in the night, struggling to be heard over the baritone of machine gun fire and explosions. The man smiled, despite the seriousness the situation demanded. They could yell all night if they wanted, nothing was better than this. Except for chocolate-covered raisins, which he maintained, God dropped on earth by accident. Something so goddammed delicous couldn't be manmade, that much he was sure of.
He crouched down and risked a quick peek from behind the wall before retreating just in time to avoid getting the top of his head shaved off, courtesy of a few hundred rounds of high velocity bullets.
“Guess that wasn't very smart,” he murmured to himself before grabbing the two-way radio on his hip and thumbing it on. “Violet. Can you hear me, Violet?”
The two-way was quiet for a moment before hissing static in response: “Unfortunately.”
“Is this fucking plan going to start anytime soon or do I gotta get shot in the ass first?” he demanded while his only safety from the continuous rain of gunfire began to disintegrate under the salvo. If he didn't hurry, his back, shoulders, and ass would be next.
Then, as though it were meant only for him, the sharp, isolated sound of metal clanging against concrete invaded his senses.
His eyes widened. Shit. He immediately pushed himself to his feet and began to run as the grenade rolled to a stop.
“There he is! Shoot him! Shoot him!”
Suddenly, chips of broken cement rushed up to meet him as bullets rained through the air, more deadly than any kind of shower the sky could produce. He rushed toward another wall on the ruined battlefield, diving toward it with as much force as he could as the blast from the thrown grenade roared behind him like some mythical beast. His luck ran out as one of the bullets slammed into his shoulder, spinning him in midair and sending him ungracefully onto the hard concrete. For a moment, he simply tried to catch his breath as he lie there.
Careless
“Shutup,” he muttered, touching his forehead and finding it smeared with warm blood.
With a grunt, he pulled himself up to one knee, letting out a deep breath while he unhitched his knife and used it to cut away the sleeve of his sweater. The air seemed to vibrate as the continuous barrage of bullets hurtled toward and past him, the sound like a swarm of angry bees.
The two-way hissed again as Violet’s voice sounded once again: “How you doin’ out there, Onyx?”
He grabbed it and slipped it between his shoulder and head, thumbing it to the setting for continuous talking. “Doin’ fine babe, and yourself?” He sucked wind through his teeth when he got a look at the hole in his shoulder. At least it doesn’t hurt, he pointed out to himself. Adrenaline was definitely doing her job tonight.
The device crackled again: “We ran into a few stray soldiers hiding in the trees back here, and they held us up for a bit. But now, everyone’s in position. You ready?”
“Hold on a sec,” Onyx grunted, removing the pair of steel forceps from a case on his belt. "While you guys were playing in trees, I was-"
He froze, head cocked. Eyes narrowed. If possible, his ears would’ve twitched like an animal’s and in a way, he was like one, sitting on his haunches, tensed. Listening.
Silence, the stranger from a few hours ago, had crept back onto the battlefield.
“Violet, what’s going on? Why is it so quiet?” he asked softly into the radio. "Tell me they all just ran because I'm so badass. Violet?"
No response. Onyx knew she was staring at his surroundings, but whether she was looking through binoculars or scope, he couldn’t guess.
The two way hissed to life. “Soldiers are beginning to sweep the area.”
“The place could use a good cleaning,” Onyx observed starting back to working on his shoulder. He didn't have much time.
A quiet laugh emerged from the two-way. “Cute. By the way, we saw you running through all those bullets back there. Really hot stu-“ A stream of static hissed over her voice before clearing away: “-like some kind of action movie.”
“You can get my autograph later,” Onyx replied, gritting his teeth as he dug into his flesh with the forceps, searching. "I'll only sign your left breast though."
“Ha, I’d rather get Cher's.”
"I'm actually a big fan," Onyx murmured. "Believe was so...inspired." There you are, he thought with wince as the forceps came into contact with the bullet.
“Look, I don’t think now is a good time to start touching yourself to Cher, Onyx. They’re getting closer.”
He couldn’t stop the laugh from escaping, even as he painstakingly drew the mangled, blood-stained slug from his shoulder. Leave it to Violet to joke around at a time like this, he thought to himself as he gazed at the bullet. And be her usual crude self while she did.
“While we’re young, sugar.”
He shook his head and dropped the slug into the case in his belt, along with the forceps. He then quickly poured a little antiseptic into the wound from a small bottle before wrapping it with the sleeve he tore. A clean cloth would‘ve been much better, but he couldn’t carry the whole damn first aid box on his belt, though many times he wish he could. He kept asking for a midget doctor to cling onto his back, but no one really took him seriously.
“Okay,” he spoke into the two-way, standing up and taking the strapped assault rifle from his back. “I‘m ready.”
“A little quicker than I expected but okay, wait for it.” The two-way went silent.
A cool wind whispered by to greet the silence before moving westward. Onyx listened, still tensed, his weapon ready to make any problems that emerged from the dark disappear as they came.
Suddenly, an explosion rocked the night, and the cry of all the soldiers mingled with it. Onyx looked out from behind the wall to see the tower on fire, thick smoke billowing from it. All of the soldiers were running back toward it, shouting. If he wanted to, he could’ve killed many of the fleeing men without a problem. Shooting them in the back, without them knowing his precise location would’ve even been pretty easy, and even a little funny, but that wasn’t his job.
The two-way crackled: “Okay, You’re good to go. I’d wish you good luck, but, you know.”
Onyx laughed. “Yeah. See you.” He thumbed off the radio, clipped it back to his hip, and chanced another glance out. This time, the only thing that greeted his face was a wind that brought with it warmth from the intense heat of the fire, and the thick smell of smoke. Finding everything clear, at least by the looks of it, he stepped out from behind the wall, rifle raised. He studied the scene before him, searching for anyone or anything that could trap him, take him by surprise.
When he saw that the coast really was clear, he began to jog toward the tower, the rifle gripped firmly in his gloved hands. His eyes darted everywhere as he ran, taking in every little detail, and the rest of his senses were on high alert as well. It would definitely suck to catch a bullet to the face from some guy hiding behind a rock.
He stopped some distance away from the tower and crouched behind a hill of broken concrete, rising upwards toward the sky like the ruined hand of some long forgotten, buried giant. Near the door of the tower, a tall, brown skinned man with slicked back silver hair spoke to two soldiers, his voice clear in the night air.
“That man is probably still out there, unless he went around to rendezvous with his mates. I sent the rest of the soldiers to take care of that little problem in the woods. In the meantime, your job is to make sure no one gets into this tower, do you understand?”
The two soldiers nodded and Onyx grinned, barely able to suppress a laugh as one of them almost started to salute the man before cringing and dropping his hand. The man’s eyes narrowed and he looked toward Onyx and the trees beyond. Onyx crouched down lower, melting in with the dark, becoming one himself. A laughing shadow.
The man turned back toward the offending soldier and glared at him. “You’re green, but that never excuses stupidity. If there were a sniper up there, I’d be the first to go and you two would follow soon after. Out here, saluting doesn’t exist. Do you understand?”
The soldier nodded, practically crimson from chagrin. The man’s eyes stayed on the soldier for a moment longer before he turned on his heel and walked inside the tower, closing the rusty, metal door behind him.
“An officer, huh?” Onyx murmured to himself as the soldiers began to argue amongst themselves about the incident. “Lucky for you, you’re not my target. Now, what to do about those guards?”
He unholstered the silenced pistol from his hip and tapped it against his head in thought. While the soldiers were busy with the others, he wanted to slip quietly into the tower and acquire his objective. Unfortunately, the pistol was low on ammo, and he knew he would need it to get around quietly inside. It would be a lot easier than having everyone in there running around looking for him when they heard the rifle fire outside.
Then he smiled and shook his head at his folly as the sound of gunfire suddenly sounded north of the tower. In the prevailing quiet, he had almost forgotten about the others and the diversion. He placed the pistol back on his hip. Without further ado, the shadow, no longer laughing, rose up from the ground and aimed with the rifle, ending the soldiers’ little debate with a few points of his own.
He ran toward the door and opened it without pausing, knowing that the two weren’t going to be bothering him when they had holes in their head to worry about. He closed the door and, after thinking about it, slid the bolt into the lock position. He then stared up at the dusty, stone steps, the path dimly lit by yellow, flickering bulbs, before beginning his quiet walk. He had returned the rifle back to its strap on his shoulder, and retrieved the pistol once again.
His nose wrinkled up in disgust as he tipped up the steps, the pungent smell of sweat, blood, and other bodily fluids he didn’t want to think about, invading his nostrils. The steps ended and at a hall leading to the right, and Onyx snuck as close to the wall as he could before quickly looking out and pulling his head back, the image burned brightly into his mind.
The hall was long and narrow, with doors lining either side and ending with one large metal door. In front of this door, two soldiers conversed quietly with one another, their demeanor casual as the burst of automatic gunfire sounded distantly outside.
Onyx blew his breath out quietly and leaned his head back against the wall, thinking. If his target was beyond the guarded door, then he would have to kill the two soldiers. But, if they were smart, they’d require a password of some kind of special knock before opening up. Which meant that he should maybe keep one of them alive. Then there was the possibility that the target wasn’t beyond the guarded door at all, and that the two posted guards were there as decoys. He shook his head as he tapped the pistol against the side of his head again, a habit that Violet said would end with his brains splattered against a wall. His clever response was always "shutup".
You could use a decoy trick as well…
Onyx mulled the thought over. It could work both ways, if executed right. He nodded to himself and set to work. First, he crept back toward the middle of the steps and began unscrewing a light bulb. One after the other, down to the end of the steps until the lower half of the stairwell was bathed in inky darkness. Then, after a deep breath, he took one of the bulbs and threw it hard down onto the steps. He covered his eyes as it burst into a million tinkling pieces and slid into the darkness, letting it cover him as he listened and watched.
“What the hell was that?” he heard one of the guards ask.
“I don’t know.”
"Well go check it out then," the first guard replied, his tone exasperated.
He didn’t hear the soldier’s approach, so Onyx knew he must’ve been creeping as quietly as possible toward the stairs, wary and alert. He raised his gun as the soldier stepped into vision, in case he wasn’t as concealed as he hoped.
For a moment, silence reigned as the soldier stared down into the dark, and just as Onyx was thinking of pulling the trigger and ending the cat's curiosity, the soldier spoke up.
“One of the fucking bulbs must’ve burst,” he called back to his companion. “Shorted out a few of the circuits, I guess.”
“Better make sure,” Onyx heard the other guard suggest.
The soldier nodded and stepped down into the darkness, and into his own demise. Before he could even make a sound, he felt a hand clamp around his mouth and the certain, icy feel of the blade at his neck. He began to shake, despite the rigorous training he must’ve went through to be in this position. Might even shit his pants, Onyx thought with an inward laugh.
“Tell him to come here,” Onyx whispered into the soldier’s ear as he removed his weapons. “If you don’t…” He slid the blade down the young soldier’s belly, and near his crotch. “I’ll cut your balls off first.”
At first, Onyx thought the young soldier would barely be able to stand, what with his knees shaking, much less call out to his buddy. “C-c-c-c…” he began to stutter quietly.
“You’d better come take a look at this,” Onyx suggested softly, letting the blade glide back up to the soldier’s neck.
“Y-you’d b-better come l-l-look at this,” the poor soldier stammered, his voice low.
“Louder,” Onyx commanded, pressing the blade against his neck. “C'mon, like you really mean it.”
“Hey, you’d better come look at this,” the soldier called out, his voice still shaky but louder, at least.
The other soldier grumbled but began walking toward the stairs, his unhurried footsteps echoing throughout the hall. Onyx quickly shifted the knife to his left, and unholstered the silenced pistol for what seemed like the twentieth time.
The grizzled, slightly chubby guard appeared in the stairway and squinted into the dark. "What the fuck's the problem?"
The bullets were quiet as they passed through his eye and forehead, causing blood to flow up in a red, velvet blanket. Likewise, he stumbled silently back against the wall and slid down into hell.
"Now," Onyx whispered to the quavering, weaponless soldier, gesturing with his free hand toward the hall of doors. "Show him to me. Show me Death..."
Chapter One
This was the only time he felt really, truly alive, with Death grinning madly in his face. And as the bullets and debris danced about him in a frenzied whirlwind, he could've been looking into a mirror. He grinned as well.
“Verify the target!” a voice yelled out frantically in the night, struggling to be heard over the baritone of machine gun fire and explosions. The man smiled, despite the seriousness the situation demanded. They could yell all night if they wanted, nothing was better than this. Except for chocolate-covered raisins, which he maintained, God dropped on earth by accident. Something so goddammed delicous couldn't be manmade, that much he was sure of.
He crouched down and risked a quick peek from behind the wall before retreating just in time to avoid getting the top of his head shaved off, courtesy of a few hundred rounds of high velocity bullets.
“Guess that wasn't very smart,” he murmured to himself before grabbing the two-way radio on his hip and thumbing it on. “Violet. Can you hear me, Violet?”
The two-way was quiet for a moment before hissing static in response: “Unfortunately.”
“Is this fucking plan going to start anytime soon or do I gotta get shot in the ass first?” he demanded while his only safety from the continuous rain of gunfire began to disintegrate under the salvo. If he didn't hurry, his back, shoulders, and ass would be next.
Then, as though it were meant only for him, the sharp, isolated sound of metal clanging against concrete invaded his senses.
His eyes widened. Shit. He immediately pushed himself to his feet and began to run as the grenade rolled to a stop.
“There he is! Shoot him! Shoot him!”
Suddenly, chips of broken cement rushed up to meet him as bullets rained through the air, more deadly than any kind of shower the sky could produce. He rushed toward another wall on the ruined battlefield, diving toward it with as much force as he could as the blast from the thrown grenade roared behind him like some mythical beast. His luck ran out as one of the bullets slammed into his shoulder, spinning him in midair and sending him ungracefully onto the hard concrete. For a moment, he simply tried to catch his breath as he lie there.
Careless
“Shutup,” he muttered, touching his forehead and finding it smeared with warm blood.
With a grunt, he pulled himself up to one knee, letting out a deep breath while he unhitched his knife and used it to cut away the sleeve of his sweater. The air seemed to vibrate as the continuous barrage of bullets hurtled toward and past him, the sound like a swarm of angry bees.
The two-way hissed again as Violet’s voice sounded once again: “How you doin’ out there, Onyx?”
He grabbed it and slipped it between his shoulder and head, thumbing it to the setting for continuous talking. “Doin’ fine babe, and yourself?” He sucked wind through his teeth when he got a look at the hole in his shoulder. At least it doesn’t hurt, he pointed out to himself. Adrenaline was definitely doing her job tonight.
The device crackled again: “We ran into a few stray soldiers hiding in the trees back here, and they held us up for a bit. But now, everyone’s in position. You ready?”
“Hold on a sec,” Onyx grunted, removing the pair of steel forceps from a case on his belt. "While you guys were playing in trees, I was-"
He froze, head cocked. Eyes narrowed. If possible, his ears would’ve twitched like an animal’s and in a way, he was like one, sitting on his haunches, tensed. Listening.
Silence, the stranger from a few hours ago, had crept back onto the battlefield.
“Violet, what’s going on? Why is it so quiet?” he asked softly into the radio. "Tell me they all just ran because I'm so badass. Violet?"
No response. Onyx knew she was staring at his surroundings, but whether she was looking through binoculars or scope, he couldn’t guess.
The two way hissed to life. “Soldiers are beginning to sweep the area.”
“The place could use a good cleaning,” Onyx observed starting back to working on his shoulder. He didn't have much time.
A quiet laugh emerged from the two-way. “Cute. By the way, we saw you running through all those bullets back there. Really hot stu-“ A stream of static hissed over her voice before clearing away: “-like some kind of action movie.”
“You can get my autograph later,” Onyx replied, gritting his teeth as he dug into his flesh with the forceps, searching. "I'll only sign your left breast though."
“Ha, I’d rather get Cher's.”
"I'm actually a big fan," Onyx murmured. "Believe was so...inspired." There you are, he thought with wince as the forceps came into contact with the bullet.
“Look, I don’t think now is a good time to start touching yourself to Cher, Onyx. They’re getting closer.”
He couldn’t stop the laugh from escaping, even as he painstakingly drew the mangled, blood-stained slug from his shoulder. Leave it to Violet to joke around at a time like this, he thought to himself as he gazed at the bullet. And be her usual crude self while she did.
“While we’re young, sugar.”
He shook his head and dropped the slug into the case in his belt, along with the forceps. He then quickly poured a little antiseptic into the wound from a small bottle before wrapping it with the sleeve he tore. A clean cloth would‘ve been much better, but he couldn’t carry the whole damn first aid box on his belt, though many times he wish he could. He kept asking for a midget doctor to cling onto his back, but no one really took him seriously.
“Okay,” he spoke into the two-way, standing up and taking the strapped assault rifle from his back. “I‘m ready.”
“A little quicker than I expected but okay, wait for it.” The two-way went silent.
A cool wind whispered by to greet the silence before moving westward. Onyx listened, still tensed, his weapon ready to make any problems that emerged from the dark disappear as they came.
Suddenly, an explosion rocked the night, and the cry of all the soldiers mingled with it. Onyx looked out from behind the wall to see the tower on fire, thick smoke billowing from it. All of the soldiers were running back toward it, shouting. If he wanted to, he could’ve killed many of the fleeing men without a problem. Shooting them in the back, without them knowing his precise location would’ve even been pretty easy, and even a little funny, but that wasn’t his job.
The two-way crackled: “Okay, You’re good to go. I’d wish you good luck, but, you know.”
Onyx laughed. “Yeah. See you.” He thumbed off the radio, clipped it back to his hip, and chanced another glance out. This time, the only thing that greeted his face was a wind that brought with it warmth from the intense heat of the fire, and the thick smell of smoke. Finding everything clear, at least by the looks of it, he stepped out from behind the wall, rifle raised. He studied the scene before him, searching for anyone or anything that could trap him, take him by surprise.
When he saw that the coast really was clear, he began to jog toward the tower, the rifle gripped firmly in his gloved hands. His eyes darted everywhere as he ran, taking in every little detail, and the rest of his senses were on high alert as well. It would definitely suck to catch a bullet to the face from some guy hiding behind a rock.
He stopped some distance away from the tower and crouched behind a hill of broken concrete, rising upwards toward the sky like the ruined hand of some long forgotten, buried giant. Near the door of the tower, a tall, brown skinned man with slicked back silver hair spoke to two soldiers, his voice clear in the night air.
“That man is probably still out there, unless he went around to rendezvous with his mates. I sent the rest of the soldiers to take care of that little problem in the woods. In the meantime, your job is to make sure no one gets into this tower, do you understand?”
The two soldiers nodded and Onyx grinned, barely able to suppress a laugh as one of them almost started to salute the man before cringing and dropping his hand. The man’s eyes narrowed and he looked toward Onyx and the trees beyond. Onyx crouched down lower, melting in with the dark, becoming one himself. A laughing shadow.
The man turned back toward the offending soldier and glared at him. “You’re green, but that never excuses stupidity. If there were a sniper up there, I’d be the first to go and you two would follow soon after. Out here, saluting doesn’t exist. Do you understand?”
The soldier nodded, practically crimson from chagrin. The man’s eyes stayed on the soldier for a moment longer before he turned on his heel and walked inside the tower, closing the rusty, metal door behind him.
“An officer, huh?” Onyx murmured to himself as the soldiers began to argue amongst themselves about the incident. “Lucky for you, you’re not my target. Now, what to do about those guards?”
He unholstered the silenced pistol from his hip and tapped it against his head in thought. While the soldiers were busy with the others, he wanted to slip quietly into the tower and acquire his objective. Unfortunately, the pistol was low on ammo, and he knew he would need it to get around quietly inside. It would be a lot easier than having everyone in there running around looking for him when they heard the rifle fire outside.
Then he smiled and shook his head at his folly as the sound of gunfire suddenly sounded north of the tower. In the prevailing quiet, he had almost forgotten about the others and the diversion. He placed the pistol back on his hip. Without further ado, the shadow, no longer laughing, rose up from the ground and aimed with the rifle, ending the soldiers’ little debate with a few points of his own.
He ran toward the door and opened it without pausing, knowing that the two weren’t going to be bothering him when they had holes in their head to worry about. He closed the door and, after thinking about it, slid the bolt into the lock position. He then stared up at the dusty, stone steps, the path dimly lit by yellow, flickering bulbs, before beginning his quiet walk. He had returned the rifle back to its strap on his shoulder, and retrieved the pistol once again.
His nose wrinkled up in disgust as he tipped up the steps, the pungent smell of sweat, blood, and other bodily fluids he didn’t want to think about, invading his nostrils. The steps ended and at a hall leading to the right, and Onyx snuck as close to the wall as he could before quickly looking out and pulling his head back, the image burned brightly into his mind.
The hall was long and narrow, with doors lining either side and ending with one large metal door. In front of this door, two soldiers conversed quietly with one another, their demeanor casual as the burst of automatic gunfire sounded distantly outside.
Onyx blew his breath out quietly and leaned his head back against the wall, thinking. If his target was beyond the guarded door, then he would have to kill the two soldiers. But, if they were smart, they’d require a password of some kind of special knock before opening up. Which meant that he should maybe keep one of them alive. Then there was the possibility that the target wasn’t beyond the guarded door at all, and that the two posted guards were there as decoys. He shook his head as he tapped the pistol against the side of his head again, a habit that Violet said would end with his brains splattered against a wall. His clever response was always "shutup".
You could use a decoy trick as well…
Onyx mulled the thought over. It could work both ways, if executed right. He nodded to himself and set to work. First, he crept back toward the middle of the steps and began unscrewing a light bulb. One after the other, down to the end of the steps until the lower half of the stairwell was bathed in inky darkness. Then, after a deep breath, he took one of the bulbs and threw it hard down onto the steps. He covered his eyes as it burst into a million tinkling pieces and slid into the darkness, letting it cover him as he listened and watched.
“What the hell was that?” he heard one of the guards ask.
“I don’t know.”
"Well go check it out then," the first guard replied, his tone exasperated.
He didn’t hear the soldier’s approach, so Onyx knew he must’ve been creeping as quietly as possible toward the stairs, wary and alert. He raised his gun as the soldier stepped into vision, in case he wasn’t as concealed as he hoped.
For a moment, silence reigned as the soldier stared down into the dark, and just as Onyx was thinking of pulling the trigger and ending the cat's curiosity, the soldier spoke up.
“One of the fucking bulbs must’ve burst,” he called back to his companion. “Shorted out a few of the circuits, I guess.”
“Better make sure,” Onyx heard the other guard suggest.
The soldier nodded and stepped down into the darkness, and into his own demise. Before he could even make a sound, he felt a hand clamp around his mouth and the certain, icy feel of the blade at his neck. He began to shake, despite the rigorous training he must’ve went through to be in this position. Might even shit his pants, Onyx thought with an inward laugh.
“Tell him to come here,” Onyx whispered into the soldier’s ear as he removed his weapons. “If you don’t…” He slid the blade down the young soldier’s belly, and near his crotch. “I’ll cut your balls off first.”
At first, Onyx thought the young soldier would barely be able to stand, what with his knees shaking, much less call out to his buddy. “C-c-c-c…” he began to stutter quietly.
“You’d better come take a look at this,” Onyx suggested softly, letting the blade glide back up to the soldier’s neck.
“Y-you’d b-better come l-l-look at this,” the poor soldier stammered, his voice low.
“Louder,” Onyx commanded, pressing the blade against his neck. “C'mon, like you really mean it.”
“Hey, you’d better come look at this,” the soldier called out, his voice still shaky but louder, at least.
The other soldier grumbled but began walking toward the stairs, his unhurried footsteps echoing throughout the hall. Onyx quickly shifted the knife to his left, and unholstered the silenced pistol for what seemed like the twentieth time.
The grizzled, slightly chubby guard appeared in the stairway and squinted into the dark. "What the fuck's the problem?"
The bullets were quiet as they passed through his eye and forehead, causing blood to flow up in a red, velvet blanket. Likewise, he stumbled silently back against the wall and slid down into hell.
"Now," Onyx whispered to the quavering, weaponless soldier, gesturing with his free hand toward the hall of doors. "Show him to me. Show me Death..."