Mistaken People, HellBound Souls: A Poem By BizarroSephiroth

FreeVerse. Know that.

Some friends in life can
Hold you when your scared
Comfort when your sad
And stay by your near death
But those hellish fools on Earth
Who ruin the lives of all
Must be stopped
Hellbound they are
With Satan they shall live
Forever

They are the ones who cause crime
They are the ones who cheat
They are the ones who sit down
In there cars and fire out their window
As they move along the street

Forget them, we can't stand up,
thats what people say
But we must or else this Earth will be
A Hellish waste of death and torment

Every day i hear al least once
Someone has died today
What the hell is wrong with these
People
Are they crazy? Are they insane?

Each one feels killing is not bad
And jail is not scary
So we must kill them all
Or at least rid the world of all this hate
So we can all get
Along

Friends will never turn out this way
Because there is always a good soul
In you
To send them the right way

YEAH!!! You Posted this one. I like this one. Maybe you should also post the hospital one it makes me warm inside *hint hint*.

Truthfully...I don't understand. Sure it's freeverse, but freeverse still has structure to it...but if I'm to understand, you only want good criticism so....uh....keep it up?