fearsstrike
08-22-2006, 09:34 PM
bold typing means screeming:
motherfuckers never met me before
yet they try to break me my soul and my core
for every touchdown they score
they make fun of me even more
you dont know what its like to have your face meet the floor
blood laied out while the teachers watch at the classrom doors
keep talking
inside me all this i will store
and one day it will all exlode and me you will all adore
day 2
why am i the one you bully
you dont even understand me
no never fully
you hate me?
i hate you too
stop fucking with me
im not in the mood
i'll kill you
i mean it
do you hear me?
i get angry, i dont care if you never seen it
i promise i will snap
i will hurt you
your setting yourselves a trap
im your worst nightmare
i'll send your bodies home in a gift wrap
fell me!
i am your spinal tap
im sick of putting up with this crap
I THINK IVE JUST SNAPPEDDAY 3
making a list isnt like the movies
its not easy
i let the pen more in the paper freely
why must i be so sleezy
its cause of them, they made me this way, really
or am i just trying to convince myself all this
is it worth it?
am i ready for deaths kiss
no, are they ready
i write the letters slowly and steady
its almost time
first in the list, eddie
michelle johnny and neddy
fuck, i forgot those guys, i have to do this fully
fuck jeana kathrine and fuck billy
i forgot about mr winston, i hate him
my dream girl katelin used to date him
funny how none kknows
i guess noone cared
who gives a shit about these hoes
im done now
schools about to start
fun time, lets see if these assholes trully have the heart
day 4
its early, people are still hanging out
i have a grin on my face, why? every one will find out
i reach for the glock
anger in my mind turnes me blank
YOU ARE ALL MY ENEMIES
DO YOU ALL SEE?
WHAT YOU DONE TO ME?
DO YOU SEE?
THIS IS WHAT YOU TURNED ME INTO
THIS IS WHY I HATE YOU
I HATE ME TOO
THIS IS THE PLAN ANGELS DREW
IM THE BAD GUY
WHO KNEW
ALL THIS SHIT, YOU THREW AT ME
IM THROWING IT ALL BACK AT YOU
I DONT GIVE A FUCK
MY LIFE IS THREW
BUT BEFORE I GET TO TAKE A GUN OUT, SOMEONE ELSE STARTS SHOOTING,
FUCKit barely missed me, whos shooting
why me
2 guys, whats going on
their killing, o shit its them
no, the glory was supposed to be mine
this is what its like
the rat a tat tat in columbine

i think you guys get the twist ending....

Prak
08-22-2006, 09:45 PM
That was the biggest pile of shit to grace disgrace this forum in a long time.

Irvybabe
08-22-2006, 10:13 PM
Umm well it was different... and more violent than anything i have read before. But thanks for your contribution to the poetry section of this forum.

jewess crabcake
08-22-2006, 10:53 PM
Wow you made one post and that one post has brutally scarred if not scared me for life. I don't know what you are used to but in FFS we don't tolerate emo drivel. For what reason you hate life I don't know but contact a psychiatrist.
Sorry for blantant rudeness

Memento Mori
08-22-2006, 11:24 PM
what the fuck is this shit? learn how to write, then present your material. This drivel is fucking pathetic...

(was that too mean?)

Denny
08-22-2006, 11:41 PM
hahahaha

Columbine~

Top Cat
08-23-2006, 12:09 AM
"BUT BEFORE I GET TO TAKE A GUN OUT, SOMEONE ELSE STARTS SHOOTING,
FUCKit barely missed me, whos shooting
why me
2 guys, whats going on
their killing, o shit its them
no, the glory was supposed to be mine
this is what its like
the rat a tat tat in columbine"


hahahahaha

oh good lord this is fantastic, keep this up and you'll be the next jeremiah griffin

Black Paladin
08-23-2006, 12:13 AM
That was the biggest pile of shit to grace disgrace this forum in a long time.


Wow you made one post and that one post has brutally scarred if not scared me for life. I don't know what you are used to but in FFS we don't tolerate emo drivel. For what reason you hate life I don't know but contact a psychiatrist.
Sorry for blantant rudeness

[QUOTE=Krelian;633767]what the fuck is this shit? learn how to write, then present your material. This drivel is fucking pathetic...

[QUOTE]


Everything I needed to say!
Do these people know what poetry is?

Pat
08-23-2006, 07:00 PM
thanks this will excellent on my myspace

then everyone will know how tortured my soul is :(