Here's my little poem thread, yay right?

Well I'll start it off with a little song I wrote;



On Your Mind

You know it's hard to go to sleep at night,
When all you're thinkin about is her, alright!
You just wish she could be right there,
You just wish you could put your hands through her hair.


You know it's hard to go to sleep,
When she in on your mind.
You know it's hard to go to sleep,
Yeah, yeah.


It's 12'o'clock and you're still not asleep,
It's so much you just want to weep,
You just can't wait until tomorrow,
She's the cause of all this sorrow.

[chorus]

It's 2'o'clock and you're finally asleep,
But her out of your mind you just cannot keep,
She's always in your dreams,
She's your one true love
And you just can't get enough!

[chorus]

Yeah, yeah
[repeat 5x]

very nice, i likes :)