Alright, another poem after a long time and go figure I don't really like it... again. Oh well, here it goes

Broken Promises

it's too late
the path has been blocked
the doors closed
and the window's shut

I wan't to scream
to ask you why
to plead for answers
but it's too late

you've walked away
and I lay here in misery
my mind a maelstrom of sorrow and pain
i'm alone

how could you give up?
on yourself and on me?
snuff out that beacon of beautiful radience
the radience that was you

didn't you know you life was precious?
didn't you see how beautiful you were?
didn't you understand what you meant to me?
didn'y you know I loved you?

Tessa Leigh Heinemann


Yah, like I said, not the best, oh well, it happens

Well I thought that was pretty good. I like the way it sounds and thought you did a good job on it. Keep them poems up!:)

thanks, you're too nice to me :rolleyes:

I thought your poem was really great, and if thats not your best work then your best must be perfect. Im surprised you haven't gotten more replies on it, it really is great, and I hope to see more of your work.

thank you sorry I haven't gotten any more poems on here yet... I HATE writer's block errrrrr *beats her head against a wall*

*shakes Tess* Get out of writers block girl... where are the rest of your wonderful moving poems...?? Ok... I am done raving for one day... :D

I love ur style of writing. The poem is very much beautiful. Keep ur peoms coming.

*sobs* I'm SORRY! *sobs* (this terrible poem is further proof of my writers block *bleh*)

simple pleasure

i wander here on the bank
night unfurls his velvet cape above me
and the moon looks down from her place on hihg
bathing the mountain in her silvery glow

the current laps gently at my bare feet and I sigh
for on this quiet night
I wander solitary and I know bliss

what subtle joy can be found
by simply strolling by the stream
alone on a warm summer night
breathing in the sweet scent of wildflowers

I look up at Luna and she beams all the brighter for me
the stars glimmer brilliantly, wiking merrily
a wolf sings to the night in the distance
and my heart rises with every sweet, sorrowful note

laying down in the thick carpet of grass and bluebells
the rapturous scent of forget-me-nots fillling my senses
and it is now, as I lay here listening to the laughter of the brook
that I realize, I am home, and my heart will ever remain in this night.

errrhehrhrheheh, I dun like it... maybe ya'll will.. I don't

I see you got over the writers block....*cheers*

Well... I like this poem Tessa. Very beautiful, descriptive and well written.

I like the rythum... a very moving poem... (I think of nature that way as well...) keep the good poems up. ^^

Well,I don't really like to read a poem,But after i see your Poem, Tessa.I think i'll change my mind^_^.

It was a good poem with well-organized rythum :)

*blinks* errrr, maybe I should put in poems I don't like more often.....:eye:

Thats a great poem. I like it and thought it was well done. Don't be so hard on yourself, just write and usually it comes out good. Keep it up.

Originally posted by SSJ
Thats a great poem. I like it and thought it was well done. Don't be so hard on yourself, just write and usually it comes out good. Keep it up.

:D you're always so nice to me *hugs*



*hugs everybody that is nice to her... and some of those who aren't*


Untitled

who are you?
why did you save me?

my heart reaches out to yours
and you shrink away
but you don't leave
why?

you gaze at me from across the room
are you afraid?
How could you be?
you're so much stronger than I

I cannot hurt you
I wouldn't if I could
so why do you draw back?
why do you run?

tell me who you are,
what your heart feels
I just want to know
to know why you fear me

i would never cause you pain
never cause you sorrow
why don't you understand?
why don't I?

*EDIT* ^^^*punt*^^

I like your Poem
'Untitled' :D *tee....hee*
I wish i can make poem too :(

what should I title do you say? *thinks*

Wow, that poem is awsome. You should think up a name for it, cause I think its really good. You have talent, you should use it. Keep it up.:)

Good poem Tessa... :D It's kool... well written and I like the flow of it.

I like it... but I am not sure about the poem title though... :uh?:

I've decided to name the untitled poem "Hesitation".. sorry I haven't posted for a while.. been REALLY busy