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beans!

That cool

Overall the picture looks great. There are a lot of little things that could have made the picture look even better, though. The leaves of the tree is probably the first thing I noticed that was good. The brances, however, could have been better. Also, the fence looks a bit flat. Fix it a little so it looks more 3d. Then there are the people. They look nice, but the girl could be improved. I like the detail and shading on the guys, though. The sidewalk and the binder are also very well drawn. So yeah, really nice, but could have been better if you were a bit more consistent with the details.

Also, the fence looks a bit flat. Fix it a little so it looks more 3d.


I'm not a masochist. While I was doing the tree, I decided that actually netting the fence would have been too much. The leaves were blurred out of the tree, but I didn't want to puta high DPI image on the site.Of course, its what I should have done. . .


whats wrong with the girl? The binder I spent the least amount of time on. I didn't think it fit in with the picture actually. . .

The binder, sidewalk, and the guy's clothes are probably the most well drawn on the picture. You want to know what's wrong with the girl? Just look and the picture and tell me. She lacks the detail the guys have. If I were to judge you by the girl, I would think you were an average artist. But, if I were to judge you by the guys, I would think you're a good artist.

She's wearing a white shirt, and I decided to use a unifrom shade for her skirt instead of detailing the folds like I did with the guys. That has to do with me drawing her in the wrong place three times and getting fed up. There's a bottom section to the picture that isn't shown, and she has very nice looking socks if that helps . . . I won't deny I did her a lot faster than the guys. She was made in "one pass". I went over the guys about 3 times each.

It lookes very lainish (watching right now!) and the mood I realy like...you could say alot of difforant things are happinig depending on how you see it.

Also the fence looks very 3d just flat at the same time...good depth..also it lookes wooden.

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I won't deny I did her a lot faster than the guys. She was made in "one pass". I went over the guys about 3 times each.

Yup. I could easily tell. You can't fool me.:D

Anyway, the fence looks more metal than it is wood to me. Besides, what kind of wire is made of wood anyway?:rolleyes:
And the fence could really have been more 3D. Make the wires and the top part of the fence look round, with maybe some light reflecting or something. Just a suggestion.