This is my first FF fanfiction. I'm not very good at writing, which may be evident in my story.

As for the plot itself, its set in the final days the Machina War around the actions of Zanarkands citizens. I've tried to stay away from known characters with two exceptions. There are brief references to other characters at this time, and places that are yet to be destroyed by Sin.

The End of the War (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2709427/1/)

I hope you like it, but in either case, constructive criticism is appreciated.