A close watch of the death, People watch and die,and Blaming athor people for there fear,
they shall hear; that fear is a terrible tear.

nothing is less if somwone dies out of mess.

everbudy wants to live, run, scream, hide
everwone wants his Pride

war,... die,kill! its they will of a soldier....and we cant nothing about it...
unless they will shout it.
war right or wrong its bad but ollso good

war is hell but Vreedom is Haven

( yeah yeah you can say any thing you want i just wright it in a few mins. )

ow BTW my English sux like hell so dont crap about that

Well it certainly is "crappy", i`ll give you that.




war right or wrong its bad but ollso good

what language is this in because i can't understand any of it

A close watch of the death, People watch and die,and Blaming athor people for there fear,
they shall hear; that fear is a terrible tear.

nothing is less if somwone dies out of mess.

everbudy wants to live, run, scream, hide
everwone wants his Pride

war,... die,kill! its they will of a soldier....and we cant nothing about it...
unless they will shout it.
war right or wrong its bad but ollso good

war is hell but Vreedom is Haven




( yeah yeah you can say any thing you want i just wright it in a few mins. )

ow BTW my English sux like hell so dont crap about that
This poem makes me cry.

Please never scar my mind again.

I'm laughing too much to make a proper reply, but whoever you are, thank you!

yeah lol....well at last somwone read it.....

:-[ well whatte heck just messing around

I'm laughing too much to make a proper reply, but whoever you are, thank you!

Furry is back!

Well, maybe.

yeah lol....well at last somwone read it.....

:-[ well whatte heck just messing around
is there something wrong with your brain

I'm putting that into my sig.

is there something wrong with your brain
I ask this too

.....umm....well some people ask that but....no not realy

( OK GUYS I KNOW THAT MY ENGLISH SUX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE QUIT IT!! WILL JAH?? )

not realy

So there is some minor dysfunction, yes?

....man just 10 posted and now its mesd up well, thinking 2 leave this forum......

is there something wrong with your brain

sorry for dubbel possting but yeah i have problems with writing English, come on guys if ya can read whats tha prob..i mean damn is this English Class??

i know that everbudy is going 2 say crappy things about me or me post.

but i hope its clear now...

is there something wrong with your brain

Yeah, the lack of it.

Yeah, the lack of it.

.....yupe just ingnore what i just posted.........

sorry for dubbel possting but yeah i have problems with writing English, come on guys if ya can read whats tha prob..i mean damn is this English Class??

i know that everbudy is going 2 say crappy things about me or me post.

but i hope its clear now...
If you write like a retard on the internet that is what you are perceived as OKAY?!?/11

fuck man.

I DONT WRITE LIKE A FUCKING RETARD ITS ON MY FRINKIN BRAINS OK??!!

I CANT WRITE NOT VERY GOOD!!


YES CAN YOU READ THIS????

OR IS IT 2 RETARD 2 READ EY?

I HOPE YA DIE WITH A DILDO STUCK IN YOUR THROAT.

AND FOR THEY ATHOR PEOPLE HOW WANT 2 POST ON THIS TOPTIC,
I STRONGLY REQUEST THAT YOU RIGHT THIS


I DONT WRITE LIKE A FUCKING RETARD ITS ON MY FRINKIN BRAINS OK??!!

I CANT WRITE NOT VERY GOOD!!


I HOPE ITS FUCKING CLEAR NOW

thank you

Grayfox

fuck man.

I DONT WRITE LIKE A FUCKING RETARD ITS ON MY FRINKIN BRAINS OK??!!

I CANT WRITE NOT VERY GOOD!!


YES CAN YOU READ THIS????

OR IS IT 2 RETARD 2 READ EY?

I HOPE YA DIE WITH A DILDO STUCK IN YOUR THROAT.

AND FOR THEY ATHOR PEOPLE HOW WANT 2 POST ON THIS TOPTIC,
I STRONGLY REQUEST THAT YOU RIGHT THIS


I DONT WRITE LIKE A FUCKING RETARD ITS ON MY FRINKIN BRAINS OK??!!

I CANT WRITE NOT VERY GOOD!!


I HOPE ITS FUCKING CLEAR NOW

thank you

Grayfox
Wow, quoting this as a tribute.

I CANT WRITE NOT VERY GOOD!!
That's all I read.

You missed the best part!


I HOPE YA DIE WITH A DILDO STUCK IN YOUR THROAT.

At least, that's how he wants to go.

this is golden~

fuck this thread, i am not gonna post in this thread anymore bye assholes

Bye :)

is this English Class?

Yes, actually.

You're posting to get criticized on a poem you wrote - in English.

Next time try using a language you have some control over to express yourself instead of a random jumble of English and made-up words.

I give him an "A" for effort, but that's cuz I've been feeling nice the past few days.

I bet you the kid titled it "a crappy poem" so we go, no no its really good, you can write them well, i think he thinks its great, well thats what his mother told him...

Rofl, why did i leave before i seen this, buddy, give up now >.<

Hahahaha

Edit: Of course this is English class, you didn't post here to get praised did you?

I had the worst day ever, still couldn�t help laughing my ass of while reading the previous posts, the perfect end to a very bad day, just wanted to thank you all for the entertainment and killing my bad mood, especially the aspiring poet

I had the worst day ever, still couldn�t help laughing my ass of while reading the previous posts, the perfect end to a very bad day, just wanted to thank you all for the entertainment and killing my bad mood, especially the aspiring poet

shut up Halomaster, no one likes you

that was a crappy poem.