Drea
02-21-2002, 01:09 AM
Another star has fallen.
Another wish was made by me.
I hope it will come true.

I hope you will feel the same-
hope that you will love me as I love you.

I should be able to spend days with you...
but those few moments we DO spend together
have yet to sate me.

It kills me to know that I might go even 2 hours without you.

My heart is aching-
throbbing with pain-
over you...

You make me yearn with your words
and promises that you haven't even made yet.

My heart is yours and you never even claimed it yet.

I want you-
completely, undeniably.

But I can't have you because I don't know what to tell you.

Ideally --in my mind--I can say dazzling things and accomplish the un-accomplishable.

But now that you are here-- in reality-- all words have left me.

And I am filled with nothing but the emotion that fills my soul, that and the Hope.

Hope that I will one day be able to pour out my soul to you.

I miss you. :Sad:

SSJ
02-21-2002, 01:12 AM
Thats another awsome poem. The moment I saw it I came to read it, only to find another masterpiece. A little bit of everything in there. Very interesting and emotional. Keep it up!:)

Luna Star
02-21-2002, 01:25 AM
Your poems are so touching and its just so nice to read them, I know they come from youe heart and thats why they are very good.

chihuadog
02-21-2002, 01:42 AM
This is another good poem. I especially like the second part of the poem, starting from the word "Ideally", but the whole poem itself is good. I just like strong endings in poems and this one has exactly that.