It's a bit out of proportion because I resized it. Ummmm comments, tips and other things like that please.

not bad my friend

lol yes not bad, but i would have liked more than one oppinion :(

Make the images much smaller than this the next time you put something online. You want people to be able to view the whole thing without scrolling, especially for simple drawings.

Also, after you get a sketch down like you've done, it's a good idea to go back over the work with cleaner solid lines.

K thankyou rezo, and I'll keep that in mind for next time for next time I post a pic.

Use a much high quality pencil and be careful of the strokes....