Ellie
09-08-2005, 02:01 AM
I know why you are here
I know why you take it all off
I know why you beg for me
I know why you are reaching
you're hands out to me
I know what you fear
Being alone with yourself.
Well let me know what you think I typed it up from memory so its not the best sorry.
Well let me know what you think
Talk about asking for it...
so its not the best
Perhaps not, but it's a definite contender for worst.
It says absolutely nothing, has no flow, and your grammar leaves much to be desired. Poetry in general sucks. Yours doubly so.
Balam
09-10-2005, 02:00 AM
hey, no one has been writting here
shade17
10-07-2005, 12:24 PM
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April
10-07-2005, 06:59 PM
Don't bump up threads ,that haven't been posted in for a month just, to post a bunch of question marks.
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IceAngel100
10-26-2005, 01:27 PM
what the heck was that all about?!
April
10-26-2005, 02:36 PM
Can people here not take a hint?
How about - don't bump up nearly month old threads TO ASK INANE QUESTIONS.