I dunno what this is. A song or a poem. Either way, just tell me what ya think. Criticise it if ya want, I don't care.

Lost In My Own Mind

Confused about the matters of life
As I struggle to find something constant
Things are changing so fast it�s a blur
Everything around me seems so distant

And so I hide in my mind
So that I can recover and rest
From the hell of the world around me
But even my mind is a mess

Lost in my own mind
In so deep I can�t escape
Lost in my own mind
In too deep to contemplate

Something�s not right, it shouldn�t be like this
Why should I suffer, why should anybody suffer?
Is this really such a great reality?
Unloved, unwanted...

Nothing really matters anymore
So why should I care?

Lost in my own mind
In so deep I can�t escape
Lost in my own mind
In too deep to contemplate

It�s so confusing, life.
Nothing stays the same for long
Laugh on the outside
Cry on the inside

Leave me alone
Lost in my mind
I just want to be alone
Lost in my mind

sounds like me a lot of the time. i'm pretty solitary by nature, so i'm normally like that last line especially. leave me alone, lost in my mind, i just want to be alone, lost in my mind.

good stuff, man.

You could probably add to it, then sell it as a chart topping number one to some kick ass band, cause the poem/song kicked ass lil' brother.

reallie good stuff Fatal Divide...I like the last two stanzas, they describe how I feel some days.

I'd like to see more stuff from you Fatal....

Thanks for the comments everybody. I'm glad you like it.

Yea thats pretty darn good. I like it alot. Hope to see more great work in the future!:)