Squalls_lover
06-03-2005, 09:57 AM
I'm intending this to be medium sized as opposed to most of my work and still rated R for obvious reasons. I'm thinking of taking a dip into the gorgeous cowboy, Irvine Kinneas's past life, and to explore how he became what we all know and love him for. I hope you will like the fic as I will be taking my time to make sure it isn't rushed. Constructive Criticism and Comments are always welcome and much appreciated as always. Enjoy!
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http://www.geocities.com/sania15uk/ikft1.txt
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IRVINE KINNEAS:
FORGOTTEN TURMOIL
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Prologue: A scene set in turmoil unravelled�
Great dark waves lashed viciously against barren and empty seashore, blanketed in the shadows of the sinister clouds above as gusts of wind howled by an abandoned lighthouse. It stood tall, wrapped in thick white and red stripes that seemed blurred and eroded by the extreme weather in this part of the world.
Not far from the lighthouse, an elevated, wide, white, structure peered out of the misty rain, almost appearing to be a marble palace in the distance. Barely visible through the haze there seemed to be a few people convened outside, while a long vehicle stood nearby ready to depart.
The strands of her long black hair flickered in her face gently as she crouched down and gave the child a warm farewell hug. She closed her eyes and felt his little arms around her neck, holding on even though she was about to let go. Sensing his hesitation to depart, she gazed into his eyes and smiled wryly. Her heart felt heavy too; worn by the memories of days spent together nursing him, making his meals and worrying over his health. Yet despite the pain, Matron dried Irvine�s tears gingerly with her thumbs and kissed his forehead.
�Irvine�You have to behave and be a good boy okay?�
She smiled, her eyes watering, but almost invisible in the misty rain.
�M-Matron�I promise I will always be a good boy.� Irvine released his grip and saw her rise to her feet again. Despite that, Irvine gazed back and observed his adoptive parents with doubt.
His step mother stood quite tall with a lilac dress wavering around her knees, a slender figure, fair skin and short blonde hair. The young boy noticed how the icy wind against his skin felt warmer than what he felt when their eyes met. She seemed to glare down frigidly at him; with all the expression and compassion of an arctic rock.
Glancing towards his adoptive father, clad in a formal brown suit and tie, he perceived a warm smile radiating from him. Irvine knew something was still not right as his friendly gesture soon disappeared, replaced by an empty stare. He discerned hostility and glanced at Matron with yearning eyes. Yet in lieu of his attempts, he knew he was going to leave the Orphanage for good. His try was to no avail.
�Mr and Mrs Kinneas, I am pleased that you�ve decided to adopt Irvine, I�m sure he�ll settle in fine after some time. You only need to pay attention to his health as sometimes he becomes seriously weak and ill because he won�t eat. You have to make sure he eats regularly. Otherwise, Irvine is a wonderful and well-behaved boy.� She beamed, stroking the young boy�s head lovingly.
�I�m sure he is, madam. Don�t worry about a thing; we�ll make sure he�s in good hands.� Mrs. Kinneas nodded, her short blonde hair wavering around her jaw in the gust. She glanced at her husband and smiled, �Won�t we dear?� upon which he grinned genuinely and added, �Of course, not to worry!�
�That�s marvellous!� Matron returned the grin and glanced at Irvine, �Don�t worry, Irvine, you�ll be fine. You�re going to meet your brothers and sisters soon, aren�t you excited?�
Empty howls of winds blew by and the boy didn�t respond with another word. He glared at them both, knowing they weren�t his friends in any way.
Sensing his discomfort, Matron bit her lower lip and wondered why he didn�t notice how nice these people really were.
Irvine felt an uneasy lump in his throat, his eyes watering from the fear of what he anticipated to be his worst nightmare; living with strangers that had masks over their faces.
The couple exchanged glances in innocence and wonderment as Matron crouched down and seemed to explain something to the defensive boy. After a while of whispering and talking between the two, Irvine slowly ambled towards them, head and shoulders slightly slumped, heart heavy.
She sighed, watching Irvine get into the big noble looking car, and could only hope he would be happy.
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http://www.geocities.com/sania15uk/ikft1.txt
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IRVINE KINNEAS:
FORGOTTEN TURMOIL
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Prologue: A scene set in turmoil unravelled�
Great dark waves lashed viciously against barren and empty seashore, blanketed in the shadows of the sinister clouds above as gusts of wind howled by an abandoned lighthouse. It stood tall, wrapped in thick white and red stripes that seemed blurred and eroded by the extreme weather in this part of the world.
Not far from the lighthouse, an elevated, wide, white, structure peered out of the misty rain, almost appearing to be a marble palace in the distance. Barely visible through the haze there seemed to be a few people convened outside, while a long vehicle stood nearby ready to depart.
The strands of her long black hair flickered in her face gently as she crouched down and gave the child a warm farewell hug. She closed her eyes and felt his little arms around her neck, holding on even though she was about to let go. Sensing his hesitation to depart, she gazed into his eyes and smiled wryly. Her heart felt heavy too; worn by the memories of days spent together nursing him, making his meals and worrying over his health. Yet despite the pain, Matron dried Irvine�s tears gingerly with her thumbs and kissed his forehead.
�Irvine�You have to behave and be a good boy okay?�
She smiled, her eyes watering, but almost invisible in the misty rain.
�M-Matron�I promise I will always be a good boy.� Irvine released his grip and saw her rise to her feet again. Despite that, Irvine gazed back and observed his adoptive parents with doubt.
His step mother stood quite tall with a lilac dress wavering around her knees, a slender figure, fair skin and short blonde hair. The young boy noticed how the icy wind against his skin felt warmer than what he felt when their eyes met. She seemed to glare down frigidly at him; with all the expression and compassion of an arctic rock.
Glancing towards his adoptive father, clad in a formal brown suit and tie, he perceived a warm smile radiating from him. Irvine knew something was still not right as his friendly gesture soon disappeared, replaced by an empty stare. He discerned hostility and glanced at Matron with yearning eyes. Yet in lieu of his attempts, he knew he was going to leave the Orphanage for good. His try was to no avail.
�Mr and Mrs Kinneas, I am pleased that you�ve decided to adopt Irvine, I�m sure he�ll settle in fine after some time. You only need to pay attention to his health as sometimes he becomes seriously weak and ill because he won�t eat. You have to make sure he eats regularly. Otherwise, Irvine is a wonderful and well-behaved boy.� She beamed, stroking the young boy�s head lovingly.
�I�m sure he is, madam. Don�t worry about a thing; we�ll make sure he�s in good hands.� Mrs. Kinneas nodded, her short blonde hair wavering around her jaw in the gust. She glanced at her husband and smiled, �Won�t we dear?� upon which he grinned genuinely and added, �Of course, not to worry!�
�That�s marvellous!� Matron returned the grin and glanced at Irvine, �Don�t worry, Irvine, you�ll be fine. You�re going to meet your brothers and sisters soon, aren�t you excited?�
Empty howls of winds blew by and the boy didn�t respond with another word. He glared at them both, knowing they weren�t his friends in any way.
Sensing his discomfort, Matron bit her lower lip and wondered why he didn�t notice how nice these people really were.
Irvine felt an uneasy lump in his throat, his eyes watering from the fear of what he anticipated to be his worst nightmare; living with strangers that had masks over their faces.
The couple exchanged glances in innocence and wonderment as Matron crouched down and seemed to explain something to the defensive boy. After a while of whispering and talking between the two, Irvine slowly ambled towards them, head and shoulders slightly slumped, heart heavy.
She sighed, watching Irvine get into the big noble looking car, and could only hope he would be happy.