I have acid in my eye and i can not cry
I have acid in my eye and I can not cry
And sockett did dit.

I grasp and die yet I CAN NOT CRY
And the sargent thought I was arron

You have a talent for posting bollocks,:) keep it up!

I find that offencive, the poem is surrealism. Sockett/sargent represents power, the acid teh ability to beat down the common man, unable to cry is unable to withstand the pressure unpon you and arron is the man whom deserves the punishment. Obviously you dont understand the arts and true literature.

Reading this poem makes me think I have acid in my eye

No socket is just a wierd guy from his school and seargent.............ditto

You have shit for a brain.

I find that offencive, the poem is surrealism. Sockett/sargent represents power, the acid teh ability to beat down the common man, unable to cry is unable to withstand the pressure unpon you and arron is the man whom deserves the punishment. Obviously you dont understand the arts and true literature.
Actually, regardless of your intended meaning, the poetry is bollocks. Sorry!

here is my poem it is good rite

I sit on my bed
crying cuz my head
hurst really really bad
i hurt it just a tad

i asked myself "why?"
only to find myself cry
cuz this world is too tough
unless u read Billy Goat's Gruff (Awesome book guys u all should read it sumtime)

I decided to end it all
and cut my wrists like a child cuts a dolls....
hair, if it has gum in it
that's the end of my poem
u all better liek it

Landlord's poem was about trying and failing.
To be funny.

Landlords is funny.

DOesnt make me want to throw acid in my eye.