(I meant this to be its own thread, sry!)

acpo
is a trance deacon
gives power to the meek an'
shows my homies
how to keep they shoes squeakin'

acpo
is my boy til the twilight
showin ladies how to fight
takes all da niggas
and shows them da light

he's a g, two-steppin',
case in point
i hand him my dime
and he's finished the joint

acpo
gave the world trance
and taught 'em how to dance
hold yo arm back and
throw the lance

acpo

acpo

apocalypse 2k5

gr8 stuff ^_^

colby
not the peppa, not the jack
shootin' up the world
wit a gatt in his sack
tellin' those homies
to stop sellin' smack
when he feels no danger
he's da first to attack

he takes all the jews
and he heats up the oven
calls up some trick
for a night full of lovin'
flashes his bling
and lights up the place
tellin them niggas
to get outta his face

with mace

they call him
M F S O
a rappin' maestro
takin' his homies
to a power metal show

cockin' his gatt
sayin'
"dat mug is phat"
his glock bangs
and lay dat nig flat
peace to da maings

Great poems. Keep up the good work ^^

i'm writing one for you next, patrick.

This is genious

tellin them niggas
to get outta his face

with mace

rofls

tellin them niggas
to get outta his face

I'm offended....bitch.

Even if you are black, you can't be offended by "niggas".

SRY I DONT HAVE ONE FOR YOU YET PAT.

This a rap about me, lil dangerous:

they call me lil dangerous
its strange to us
that you can run yo' mouth
and say you made us bust

we ain't goin no where
we the L N C K
if youse a smooth talker
i might have yo bay-bay

but i ain't yo' baby momma
imma gangsta bitch
so you can get the hell out
and don't forget yo' tricks

cos those silly ass hos
dunno how to spit game
when they stand next to me
they look fuckin' tame

so lemme tell y'all
what its about to be
stop talking 'bout yo timbalands
and forget those white teez
lil dang'rous in the house
youse a stupid punk
so get outta my way
i'm about to get CRUNK

this is mighty fine

Rofl:

http://www.angelfire.com/nv/rapsucks1/

And:

http://www.angelfire.com/nv/rapsucks1/oth.html

Real music is defined as: not fucking rap! Basically, I consider any music that isn't rap\pop\techno to be real music. Any music played with instruments is real music.


ODIN FOUND JOHNNY'S SITE

John Stamos, no less. Unless I'm mistaking the name for someone else, but I can't be arsed to check right now, rofl.

SRY I DONT HAVE ONE FOR YOU YET PAT.

This a rap about me, lil dangerous:

they call me lil dangerous
its strange to us
that you can run yo' mouth
and say you made us bust

we ain't goin no where
we the L N C K
if youse a smooth talker
i might have yo bay-bay

but i ain't yo' baby momma
imma gangsta bitch
so you can get the hell out
and don't forget yo' tricks

cos those silly ass hos
dunno how to spit game
when they stand next to me
they look fuckin' tame

so lemme tell y'all
what its about to be
stop talking 'bout yo timbalands
and forget those white teez
lil dang'rous in the house
youse a stupid punk
so get outta my way
i'm about to get CRUNK

Lame generic BS by someone with no clue.

This is real rap:

Nas ft. Quan - Just A Moment

[Verse 1: Quan]
Can we please have a moment of silence?
That's for my niggaz doin' years in confinement
And for my soldiers who passed over, no longer living
That couldn't run whenever the reaper came to get 'em
Can we please pour out some liquor?
Symobolizin', let's take in time to consider that
Though our thugs ain't here, the love is here
And we gon' rep 'til slugs kill us here
This for my dawgs stuck in the struggle tryin' to gain
Smokin' trauma, sniffin' Ra while sellin' cocaine
Trapped in the game, not knowin' how to stop and get by
To live it alive, so instead they live it to die
Can we please have a moment of peace?
For every G that fell for his flag in the streets
Bloodin' and thuggin', folkin' and lokin'
Crypin' and creepin', Latin and kingin'
Or just for poor righteous teachin'

[Chorus: Quan sings]
As days goes and nights fall
For the rest of our life we'll miss y'all
And even though life must go on, we'll still mourn
While wishin' y'all were home

[Verse 2: Nas]
Yeah, and can we have another moment of silence?
For brothers who died from black-on-black violence
From here to the Dark Continent where rebels sell diamonds
To clients allover the world, got little Black girls dyin'
And can we please pour some more liquors?
For Will, Bokeem, Bar, Pappy -- my niggaz
Here's another Warrior Song from Nasty and Quan
It's to him I pass the baton to carry this on
Street's Disciple, salute to those who's gone with bullets
And I promise through rhymin' Quan gon' rep his life to the fullest
And can we please have a moment of truth?
For soldiers and troops away with helmets and boots
And families back home who pray they make it home safe
Hopin' that they don't get hit with a stray or missiles
This is just a moment to let you all know that we miss you
Mommy I'm still here, wishin' I was there with you
Let's take 'em home

[Chorus]

[Verse 3: Quan]
And can we please have a moment to mourn?
For Pac, Biggie and Pun 'cause through us they live on
Jam Master Jay, Freaky Ty and Alliyah
Big L and Left Eye, when we die we wish to see ya
Can we please have a moment for children?
Who got raped or murdered, or trapped in the system
Who never knew their father, never learned to dream
But was guided by drug dealers, killers and crack fiends
For single mothers that's forced to play mom and dad
Bustin' her ass to give her kids shit she never had
For my niggaz in the pen hopin' rhymes'll get 'em signed
So when released, they can say bye to a life of crime
For very mother that held a son in the street bleedin'
Cryin' a song of sorow to dark and deep for speakin'
Just a moment outside the day to day struggle
To let the ones we really care about know that we love 'em

o shit

:words:

you're a stupid fgt. get out of my thread.

you're a stupid fgt. get out of my thread.

Thats real mature...bitch.

The whole thread wasn't meant to be taken maturely. I dont see how you can flip out when someone critiques your work, but when I make some joke-raps, you're awfully quick to tell me how bad it is.

loosen up that sphincter, please

You're right, I won't argue with you.

I'm just in a crazy mood right now, going through some crazy shit. Have your fun.

i'm sorry you're black :'(

i'm sorry i'm fat :'(

os hit

Oh, the irony

cant well all just get along and not fight on the threads?


i mean whats the point you just going to keep going its not like you can really win something like that unless you know where that person lives and you beat the holy hell outa them

Oh, you silly n00b, you.

lmao!

*imagines some one TYPING down a rap trying to look cool*

lMAO!

LOL THATS ME

i am fucking leet

lmao!

*imagines some one TYPING down a rap trying to look cool*

lMAO!
*imagines somebody making a shitty ff sig and trying to look cool*

lMAO