Infinity
02-26-2005, 04:44 PM
why do you bother talking to me
u know I will not listen
maybe theres somthin bout u, all this I just been missin
why did I stay, keep movin on
just wished I could dispare, poof, be gone
still I stayed
kept tryin an tryin
all those lies I had been buyin
still I belived, stayed by your side
as the pain gew far an wide
still I did stay,
always knew,
I will never forget that day
from my memory I erase your exsistance
trying to make more and more distance
why did I even try
all those days I refused to cry
I thought there was a chance, just a little
but every time I got caught in the middle
I didnt give up, tried to understand
but now even I think u should be baned
this poems unfinished,though I've no more to say
see me again, this is the last day
I'm leaving now, farwell and goodbye
I'm leaving now, ask yourself, not me why

kirea
04-12-2005, 12:55 PM
wow...thats quite good!

mrmonkeyman
04-12-2005, 01:01 PM
Learn to spell.
You use unoriginal, generic rhymes.
That was poop.

Dragoncurry
04-14-2005, 05:31 AM
That was poop?! Who the hell says that anymore lol.

"from my memory I erase your exsistance
trying to make more and more distance"

Hahahahhaah. IDIOT.

mr. patterson
04-14-2005, 05:31 PM
just wished I could dispare, poof, be gone


dis poem is pure full of emotions like

KREAYSHAWN
04-14-2005, 06:04 PM
why do you bother posting this poen
u know we will not like it

=/

Marceline
04-14-2005, 06:37 PM
That was poop?! Who the hell says that anymore lol.

I do!

poop.

jiro
04-15-2005, 05:55 AM
no ice