Trouble Is Me
01-27-2005, 08:25 PM
I'm starting yet ANOTHER story, and I want to see what you think of the opening.
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�Come along, Morrigan� The person addressed pushed curly hair out of her eyes in annoyance. She turned and continued following her companion down the time-worn path. She approached him, who was as beaten by the elements and time as the track they were walking.
�You called, Taka?� He turned and gave her a look of confusion, shaking his head.
�No. You know I don�t like to talk while travelling down this cursed path� He shivered, viewing their heavily wooded surroundings with suspicion. Morrigan rolled her eyes. They were all like this. Superstious to a fault, they never spoke out loud in a place of the Lady�s for fear of getting caught.
Though popular rumour said that the �Lady� was not a creature of the earth, others argued that she was just as human as every one of them. Sometimes she was a kind, wise deity; other times a cunning sorceress, sometimes, a courageous lady-knight, riding a steed as white as snow. Her appearance changed along with her stories. Most of the time she was a willowy lady, with pale hair and even paler skin. In others she was a spirited redhead, when freckled skin and a fiery temper. Least of all, she wasn�t human, but a monster of some sort, a demon.
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That's all I've come up with, so far. There is more, but it's all just ideas not strung together properly. No stealing! It doesn't make much sense anyway.
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�Come along, Morrigan� The person addressed pushed curly hair out of her eyes in annoyance. She turned and continued following her companion down the time-worn path. She approached him, who was as beaten by the elements and time as the track they were walking.
�You called, Taka?� He turned and gave her a look of confusion, shaking his head.
�No. You know I don�t like to talk while travelling down this cursed path� He shivered, viewing their heavily wooded surroundings with suspicion. Morrigan rolled her eyes. They were all like this. Superstious to a fault, they never spoke out loud in a place of the Lady�s for fear of getting caught.
Though popular rumour said that the �Lady� was not a creature of the earth, others argued that she was just as human as every one of them. Sometimes she was a kind, wise deity; other times a cunning sorceress, sometimes, a courageous lady-knight, riding a steed as white as snow. Her appearance changed along with her stories. Most of the time she was a willowy lady, with pale hair and even paler skin. In others she was a spirited redhead, when freckled skin and a fiery temper. Least of all, she wasn�t human, but a monster of some sort, a demon.
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That's all I've come up with, so far. There is more, but it's all just ideas not strung together properly. No stealing! It doesn't make much sense anyway.