This thread is for those that want to post up their random poetry anything. I know that the person making the poem can post it in one new thread but i figured why clog up the whole forum. So anyways whoever wants to write anything or something like that post it here and people you can rate it or comment on it. I'll start off.

Can you see the cold night air?
The stars shining in the darkness
The shining the beautiful night
Feel the night air against your face
There's nothing that's gonna stop this
Nothing...

I am surrounded by drakness, a thick black mist. Slowly I walk around in it never finding a way out. I sit down and silently cry, tears rolling down my face. Suddenly I see a tiny light and hear your voice calling my name. I dry my tears and run to you crying out your name, but the closer I get the more that light and your voice fades, by the time I reach you, you have completely disappeared.
The black mist gets thicker. I sit back down, my eyes go dull, I breath a deep sigh with a tear falling down my cheek. "I will wait here and let the darkness consume me." I say bearly louder than a whisper. I pull my knees up to my chest and wrap my arms around the resting my head on my knees. The black mist slowly licks around my feet, slowly covering my whole body.

nice Sephiroths Bride

Thanks Its based on a dream Ive been having lately.

Heres another one but its NOT mine its a friend's

You are my idol
You are my life
Your light shines on
me though the night
You are my bright star,
my luna flower
I look up to you in my darkest hour.

I watch the only thing close ot your beauty
The morning rising ever so slowly over the horizon
All the beauty that is captured
All the elegance in the view
Everything is almost here...
Now all I need is you...

Once again this is not one of mine

Look down there what do you see? Do you see it? Do you see me? oh how I wish, wish that it were true because you know I do, do truely love you. Tell me you see me, you see me too, tell me you love me the way I love you

Nice one


When you cry
I�ll tend to you
When you fall
I�ll pick you up
When you�re afraid
I�ll hold you close
When you�re sad
I�ll make you happy
When you feel alone
I�ll be standing here for you
When you�re angry
I�ll be here to calm you
And when you need me
I�ll be only one step away
When no one gets you
I�ll try to understand
When you�re depressed
I�ll show you happiness
When you�re in need of a friend
I�ll be waiting
When you run away
I�ll find you
When you�re in trouble
I�ll come to your rescue
When you�ve had your heart broken
I�ll mend it back together
When you�re lost
I�ll come and help you to find your way
And when you�re ready
I�ll love you�

This is not a poem its a story that I have started to write.
http://quizilla.com/users/Kibas-Bride/quizzes
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Oh god, get off the binary opposite train you unoriginal ass.
SAD.
HAPPY.
CRY.
LAUGH.
GOOD.
BAD.

I walk along the beach and stand in the surf feeling the cold water washing over my feet making the bottom of my jeans wet. A icy breeze wraps itself around me, making me shiver.
I remember your arms around me making me feel safe and warm. I rise my hand to my lips in remembrance of when your lips gently kissed mine, even now I feel the heat come to my cheeks as I blush.
A thought comes over me causeing my hand to fall to myside, making my head hang low. I grow cold. Will I ever feel your arms around me again? will I feel the warth of your lips once more?
A shadow creeps over me and I give a shudder, I look over the wild sea and whisper "I wonder."

Nice one SB.

It wasn't. Why are you lying. Both gramatically and content-wise, it was generic imagery. God.

Nice one SB.
*smiles* Thank you.

*smiles* Thank you.
http://www.thesaurus.com.

That'll really spice it up.

<table><tr><td valign=top>
<font color="000000" size="1">
People who
Don't Think
probably don't have brains;
rather they have
grey fluff
that's blown
into their
heads
by
mistake

</font></td></tr></table>

<table><tr><td valign=top>
<font color="000000" size="1">
People who
Don't Think
probably don't have brains;
rather they have
grey fluff
that's blown
into their
heads
by
mistake

</font></td></tr></table>

:swoon:

Eeyore :)

Greatest poet of all time, if you ask me.

I made this up myself.

So much...

There is so much more to me
Then what you know
There are things that lie underneath me
You don�t even know
The is a feeling call insecurity
There is a feeling called fear
There is a feeling called scared

On top of all that glamour and craziness
There is a person that has feelings
That cares about the ones she loves
more than anything in the world
On top of that smiling face there is a person
That maybe you need to get to know

This person has had their fair share of losses
Loosing the people that she loved so much
This person just wants to fit in, be normal
And feel the same way back
This person just wants to have friends.

Nice job.

o dear.

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Lol that's a good one.

I look for you in all the wrong places
I try and listen for your voice
I fail because i'm in such a haste
I try to find you
But I can't
I scream for you
I yell your name a loud
Hoping you would hear
To come to me
And to be with me
I try to find you
But I can't...

Nice one CS. *wipes tears away from face* I know what thats like.

Random thoughts.....

I called out and you walked away for no reason
The words broke and I feel treason
Now I'm back here, in the place you were supposed to take me away from
I thought I could leave this behind but you left me feeling so numb
That I can't shed any tears
What you said to me made it so clear

But in the end, you made it even worse
I can't look at you because it still hurts
And I know your life is great now
But you didn't have to leave me in a worse state than I am now
I never wanted to see this end
But you left me no choice but to go to where I've been

When you take me in your arms, I feel safe and warm.
You called me sweetheart, no ones done that before.
I love getting caught in the rain with you, playing on the swings, taking walks along the beach, all these things I love but only with you.
Our heads side by side as we dance in the moonlight.
Color rise's to my cheek's making me blush.
Love is not easy, its the hardest thing in life,
but I know in my heart that you are the one for me.

I am surrounded by drakness, a thick black mist. Slowly I walk around in it never finding a way out. I sit down and silently cry, tears rolling down my face. Suddenly I see a tiny light and hear your voice calling my name. I dry my tears and run to you crying out your name, but the closer I get the more that light and your voice fades, by the time I reach you, you have completely disappeared.
The black mist gets thicker. I sit back down, my eyes go dull, I breath a deep sigh with a tear falling down my cheek. "I will wait here and let the darkness consume me." I say bearly louder than a whisper. I pull my knees up to my chest and wrap my arms around the resting my head on my knees. The black mist slowly licks around my feet, slowly covering my whole body.

Very nice.


When you take me in your arms, I feel safe and warm.
You called me sweetheart, no ones done that before.
I love getting caught in the rain with you, playing on the swings, taking walks along the beach, all these things I love but only with you.
Our heads side by side as we dance in the moonlight.
Color rise's to my cheek's making me blush.
Love is not easy, its the hardest thing in life,
but I know in my heart that you are the one for me.

Also very nice.


Lol that's a good one.

I look for you in all the wrong places
I try and listen for your voice
I fail because i'm in such a haste
I try to find you
But I can't
I scream for you
I yell your name a loud
Hoping you would hear
To come to me
And to be with me
I try to find you
But I can't...

ALSO very nice.

I'm sorry to say
This is the last day
I may be back
But I am never sure
Time is what I lack
So this is it
This is my good bye...

Nice CS

Oh are thank you BizarroSephiroth

No offense or anything but this generally sucks, all your "poems" are basically all the SAME only with different words, try some variation and sentences longer then 4 words?

No offense or anything but this generally sucks, all your "poems" are basically all the SAME only with different words, try some variation and sentences longer then 4 words?
What do you mean?? they are.

I like your poems, you did a great job. ^_^

What do you mean?? they are.
What he means is you're sticking to the same conventions and clich�s as every other goddamn poet on the internet these days.

What he means is you're sticking to the same conventions and clich�s as every other goddamn poet on the internet these days.
Well Im sorry. Really I am. I will try and be more different. Please forgive me.