dyne trance
09-09-2004, 04:26 AM
Final Fantasy (whatever number)

A man of strong will, kneels down to bow for his king. He is knighted courageous, and the most trustworthy man in the land. Another man, filled with evil, is clenching his fists, furious that he wasn't knighted, for he wants to rule and over come the weak.
The knighted man stands up and turns to walk down the aisle into town. When he notices a strange young woman with soft, golden-brown hair and gleaming blue eyes hanging from a tree and peeking into the window. A crack; the branch snaps and falls, the young girl with it. The man rushes out the door and to the side of the caslte to help this maiden.
"Are you alright, miss?" The girl stares into his eyes, and becomes speechless, "I-I-I, was getting my... bag. Yeah, my bag. I accidentally got it in that tree and then the branch broke."
Unfooled by this lie, the man helps her up, kisses her cheek and says farewell. The girl wonders in her head: Will I ever see him again?...

Sorry, I just thougth I'd put that. Just got inspired. I hope it wasn't bad...

hb smokey
09-09-2004, 09:59 AM
wtf is it?

dyne trance
09-09-2004, 02:15 PM
Just the intro story/FMV to a new FF (I made it up, there is -1% chance you'll ever see this is in an FF).

Tokiko
09-09-2004, 06:05 PM
It's... just a scene. Not bad, not not stunning really... ;)
And actually, since it IS writing, shouldn't it be in the Fiction forum...?

dyne trance
09-09-2004, 10:10 PM
Thanx:D

Oh.... haha, I wondered if it should've been somewhere else... you can move it if it should be there.

(sorry about replying after everything :-D)

KREAYSHAWN
09-11-2004, 02:54 PM
Moved innit