hello all =)

I is not too much or posted his alor I post here ( moved if it is not the right place )
I wanted to apologize for my bad english ( I'm French )

I would like your opinion on a small ripe I made,whether that will or will not ( since you aite of subject matter experts =) ) there is some music that may not all ( this is done to add to the official album )

here is the link ver video : Uncharted Golden Abyss ( Expanded Score Edit ) - YouTube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qbF0DGVrFXM&hd=1)