A Great warrior

He stands tall apon a rock
high on top of the mountin
Standing proudly in the sky
He looks apon the great lake

He draws his sword slowly
showing the world his honour
Without him there would be nothing
a proud warrior of his achievments

He lost a friend but gained another
his achievement could not be matched
his pride could not be matched
His honour could not be matched

This warrior is greatest of them all
he slowly puts his sword away
starts walking away
Thinking of his mission
Cloud strife

edit'd by sarah:

please don't attach random images. :-(

Frankly, that was awful. Period. It had no redeeming value whatsoever. If you wrote it on paper, it would only be good as kindling. Perhaps you can market it as a vomit inducer.

That was so bad, the paint started peeling off the walls when I read it aloud. My modem cried out in pain while loading it. The soda I was holding started to boil. It's just a small blessing that I clicked away from it before I was forced to tear my own eyes out.

It's nice to be honest, but you don't need to overdo the harsh-ness, k?

I thought it was bland. There needs to be some rythmic and meaning in it.

Ok i will work on another one

Originally posted by The_Guillotine_Girl
It's nice to be honest, but you don't need to overdo the harsh-ness, k?

I thought it was bland. There needs to be some rythmic and meaning in it.
I agree with all of these sentiments.
Really, Prak, that was too harsh.

That's coming from you, MMM? I was trying to be funny, but maybe I did go a bit over the top. I was serious about thinking it was bad though.

I found it humorous, but it was over the top. =\

Man...... the last part sucked!
dude, you need help.

Prak was being kind in his descriptions of how horrible that was.

I'll spare you of what I thought when I read it, since it seems you wouldn't be able to handle it anyway.

I absolutely love the way this was written.

It's all aimless and such. A lot of fun to read.