Here's a poem of mine. Please tell me what you think:

This feeling is so hard
It weighs heavily on my heart
I feel like I shouldn't have said what I said
I feel like I shouldn't have done what I had done
But I couldn't take it back
And I wish I could for all the world

Everytime I start thinking
This feeling comes to mind
And I become sad
I don't know what it is
Perhaps it is regret?


...That's as far as I got. I can't seem to finish it though. :o

What do you mean "It's not a very good poem", I'm sure it will be fine once its finished, infact it's quite good allready!

Thanks. :D I probably won't finish it, but if I do, I'll post it here.

You should finish it, it allready shows you have real talent.

That's a good poem....way better than I could do!

Yes its quite good. I suck at poems but I know thats good. Keep it up!;)