Here is one of my songs I don't like but my friend says it's good so I would like some further input on it if you will...Danke!;)

Let go of my hand,
I�m not falling for you again.
For myself I make this stand,
You make moving on so easy.
With your catchy words,
And your deep blue eyes;
But I�m smarter than your lies.

Chorus
So when this all comes back to haunt you,
Don�t come running back to me,
I was there once but you pushed and used me,
Find another guy to play your games�

You make moving on so easy,
Rubbing him in my face;
But, girl, what you don�t realize,
Is that I know its all waste.
It�s funny how with certain people,
True colors only truly show,
When you�ve been through Hell and back you know.

Chorus

I�m glad you say you�re over me,
But what good is talk,
When I was closure, yeah I�ve seen.
I�ll find someone else who,
Will love me, not put me through,
All these things that you did to me.
I should be mad, but no I can�t be.
When I see the desperation in your eyes.

it is really good i like it. :) what does the rest ofthe song sound like i wonder? but u got great lyrics i would listen to that song.

Pretty cool song. Decent lyrics.