this is an unfinished poem i just started working on i just want to see thus far what you think of it or what you think it is about.

she closed her eyes as her head found his shoulder
then she exhaled and kept her head there for a few moments
as she lifted her head from his shoulder , her lips found his
whilst the kiss became deeper, her heart fluttered and stirred
she had waited for six years for this very moment
when the kiss ended she hesitantly said goodbye
standing there for a several minutes
she tried to uncover the courage to say what she was holding back
the courage was not to be uncovered
as the days passed she realized that he had become the object of her affection
she unfortunately could not act on these emotions
for fate had fallen short this time
stuck at the crossroads of love and betrayal

So, what is the poem about? Yeah, it sounds like a love story or something like that, but what is this one centered around?

its about a girl who is with a guy but is falling for someone else she has had a crush on her teenage existence. and now he is showing her the same interest, but she is taken.

wow, very strong meaning and very good poem! Keep it up! I can only hope this isnt a real story taken from your life...

i decided to leave it open for speculation on the ending i flet that the poem was meant to end that way. thanks fo rthe compliment . i have another poem on here you should look at. as for it being from my real life well who knows maybe it was maybe it wasnt. ill let you decide.


happy smiley face time