Neko_Kitten
04-27-2004, 01:43 AM
Night falls gently as the tears come again.
I know not where you are my love,
But do you still know who I am?

Life tares the threads that bind us all,
Killing Giants,
Crushing Moles...
Silent as a snowflake
I look upon your face,
A memory,
A Photograph,
An image lost in space.

You call out to me in my dreams,
I call you on the phone.
You make my dreams sound as if it's child's fantasy,
Jealousy of a friend's life.
Wishing I had what she did...

Nothing reaches you,
Do you even know who I am?
Did you ever take the time to learn?
You touched my hand, my heart, my mind...
You created a new me,
And left so I could fend for myself.

Where are the sunny days,
Summers at the beach long gone.
Rainy days huddled up together,
Trying to keep warm.

I called you this evening,
You talked to me a little.
How can I tell you how I feel?
When I can't admit it to my self.
Are these feelings true?
Or just words I think i need?

I don't think i could ever share...
this with you.
You are strong, and brave, and every thing I'm not.
It kills me to think of it,
I could cry my self to sleep,
But at this point it doesn't matter.

I want you here with me,
I know that much is true.
My friend, My life, My hope, My love.
Will you ever return to my side?
Will you remember me if you do?

If you have forgotten then it is best...
Not to come back...
Not to drag you back...
Into the past with me.

Another day
Another phone call.
Another check on the calendar...
Promises broken again and again...
Empty memories... Empty fears...

Come back Home,
At least once more.
All I need is one finial goodbye...
Before I can let go...

zidane tribal
04-27-2004, 02:34 AM
That was really nice. I def liked it. I really liked the opening lines too. Great job : D

Neko_Kitten
04-27-2004, 02:43 PM
Originally posted by zidane tribal
That was really nice. I def liked it. I really liked the opening lines too. Great job : D thank you. i just wish i was brave enough to show it to the person i wrote it for...

zidane tribal
04-27-2004, 06:47 PM
Well if you believe in fairy tale endings just tell him how you feel. Plus you'll regret it if you don't :D

Neko_Kitten
04-28-2004, 11:46 PM
Originally posted by zidane tribal
Well if you believe in fairy tale endings just tell him how you feel. Plus you'll regret it if you don't :D I'd rather keep my best friend then know if he would ever have been my true love. Love coems and goes, there will be others. A true best friend is 1 in a million

omnitravis
04-29-2004, 03:54 AM
I didnt read all of it, im sorry for that, i wont judge it. But If you like(love) your best friend, keep it secret. Please, for your sake, god i wish i had, im ruined now...

zidane tribal
04-29-2004, 09:30 PM
Originally posted by Neko_Kitten
I'd rather keep my best friend then know if he would ever have been my true love. Love coems and goes, there will be others. A true best friend is 1 in a million

yea well i just started my best friend of four years. and everything is wonderful. she's my best friend, and my girlfriend now.

remember, life is full of chances of regrets. but you also regret the chances you didn't take.

think about that : D

drakozombie
07-24-2004, 05:33 AM
Wow. I really liked that, it's much better than I could do. I kinda feel the same way and all.....hmmm.

ad_022
07-24-2004, 02:44 PM
Originally posted by zidane tribal
regrets are chances that werent taken

I likewise have a story like this so...things can come out for the better...you just have to give it a chance...;)

mrmonkeyman
07-24-2004, 02:53 PM
I FEEL THE TEARS UPON MY FACE NOTHING ELSE WILL TAKE YOUR PLACE I LOVE YOU SO MUCH CAN'T LET YOU GO OH NO OH NO OH NO OH NO.

PS: Copy read.