Here's one I wrote pretty recently! It's about a friend of mine... of course, named Alex. He's cool, but I sense some loneliness in him... I thought him important enough to write about!

Alex F.

Alex F.
A blue-eyed boy
?trapped?
in a spinning fantasy world,
?alone?
A hand cast out of
water,
gleaming with rings of sliver on the fingers.

?Trapped?
in a spinning fantasy world,
?alone?
He calls,
weakly,
to me?you?him?her?
But, no one can hear
him.

A blue-eyed boy,
swimming in gleaming
water.

?Trapped?
?Alone?

A spinning fantasy world,
he skims his fingers over
water.

And here's my most recent one. I wrote it one day after I just got off grounding for like... a month and a half cause I had snuck out of the house.

Good Morning!

Good Morning!

i like our(my) sky today.
The sun stirs the
clouds.
The blue of an ocean,
mother
to the other angels.

May i please
borrow(!have!) back my
wings,
please?

With your permission,
i'll fly along with the others,
sing,
shield and
shun,
with your permission(of course).

i do like them. i like the repetition aswell. a lot of good detail.