well......... why'd you pick your answer? elaborate people!

Of course you know who I voted for.
But this thread will probably get closed.

Thanks for the publicity though.

Wouldn't see why it would be closed. It has a topic that works with Fiction, if only to rate other's work.

Just as long as you actually rate their work and don't go off on some crazy non-Fiction&Poetry related tangent.

To be factual, it's Lightning Mage's story. FF Master made his version for the sake of competition from the best I can tell... if they both go at the rate they are currently going, it looks like the two are going to end up being intertwined to the point of being impossible to separate... Then they'd both have a lot of explaining to give Square-Enix come time to actually show them...

*Square-Enix Dude:* "Herm... yeah, this one guy gives me this one story one day, then the very next day, this other guy gives me what looks like the first story in a paralell universe or something... They're currenly arguing over who has legitimate claim, and in the mean time, our lawyers tell us that we aren't equiped to touch this concept with a 600 foot pole."

ff MASTER is just making his own version of mine. So far it relates to mine in just one way I can see, and that's the fact he is using the name Wade. Actually he suggested that name to me in the first place.

Our stories are almost totally different.

just rename the characters, how bout Djinn for a name? or maybe Allus?

Both of them were only semi-legible :( Lightning's more so than FF's.

Well there won't be many more characters. I don't really know where my story is going to go. I allready know the ending, but I don't want to end it too soon. I just am not too good at the whole middle part of a story. Suggestions for other things that should happen without screwing up the story are welcome.

well i have all my story worked out except the end the middle is all sorted i have more characters to come up with and reveal. and the only reason i'm writing this is

1= i wont to
2=coz lightning mage said set somit up coz i was adding add ons to him. and its not for competition.

and if we do get a contract one day with square enix the credit should go to lightning mage coz he kicked it all of but at the end of the day. they will look them through and choose the one which sutes them. SO YOU NEVER KNOW.

You...wont get a contract. I'm not being mean, I'm being realistic. Sorry.

your propably right. but the future is still ahead of us and is still to be written. but for my benifit and lightning mages i hope we do get contracts ONE DAY.

Even if I don't work for Square Enix, I still want to become an author. So I have around 10 or so years to develop my future talents as a writer.

... And so it went.
But little did mrmonkeyman, ff MASTER, and The Imortal know that Lightning Mages writing would engulf readers and soon enslave humanity for all ETERNITY!!!!!!!


*coughs*

Wellgottagobye!

*runs silently from room and locks self in basement to write his autobiography, How I Enslaved the Human Race- By "Lightning Mage"*

Read what I said to ffMASTER, as you sound like you actually would benefit from it :) Well, most of it.

I think it's funny that people are writing FFXV concepts, and even somewhat neat... Know what, I might just write my own. lol.