Darth Revan
02-28-2004, 08:09 AM
Hey everyone, here�s another one of my stories, this time based on the PS2 game, Dynasty Warriors 4, specifically it�s edit officer option. Yes, this is a story with Original characters in it, interacting with the officers of each main force. There�s going to be two original characters in this story, which I own both of them. The first officer is a Wu warrior called Shao Kang, and the second is his younger sister, Seung Mai.
Depending on how well received this story is, I may start to post my other Dynasty Warriors stories I�ve written here on FF Shrine as well. So if you like this one so far, please let me know. Anywayz, on with the story�.
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DYNASTY WARRIORS � THE TIGER AND THE DRAGON
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Chapter One :
The small Wu force, under the command of Sun Ce, was victorious over the much larger Shu force, led by Zhang Fei. Sun Ce himself, was elated with the victory as he leaned against the wall of a nearby hut, smiling to himself.
The damage to the small village was low, even with some of the fighting being the most fierce around the numerous buildings and civilian fatalities were nil. In Sun Ce�s eyes, it had been a very successful battle. He turned his gaze unto his men, who were assisting the villages in cleaning up whatever mess there was, strewn throughout the streets.
One of his warriors was helping a young woman tend to the wounded. It was this warrior Sun Ce was curious about the most. Shao Kang was an enigma, mystery surrounded him, ever since the first day Sun Ce and Zhou Yu had encountered the young man, during the final moments of the battle at Hu Lao Gate. At the time, the young warrior had been serving Lu Bu and Zhang Liao, and had already proven himself as a capable warrior, slaying nearly a hundred of the allied forces. It was after Dong Zhuo had fled, as did Lu Bu, Diao Chan and Zhang Liao, Shao Kang and the small troop of soliders left behind, found themselves surrounded by the allies. Cao Cao had wanted them put to death, Liu Bei was against the idea, stating that the individual now has a choice, a chance to relive his life. Yuan Shao studied Shao Kang, and looked at Sun Jian. The Wu lord nodded and Shao Kang�s life was saved. From that moment forth, he served Wu.
And now, ten months later, Sun Ce had to admit, having Shao Kang in the Wu army had been the right choice. He motioned for the young warrior to join him. Shao Kang nodded, spoke a few words to the woman he had been helping, and then approached his lord.
�Yes, Lord Sun Ce?�
Sun Ce sighed. He hated being addressed as �Lord�.
�Shao Kang, how many times, must I tell you to address me as Sun Ce. NOT �LORD�!�
Shao Kang chuckled as he brushed one of the bangs of his hair from covering his face.
�Sorry� Sun Ce. Force of habit.�
Sun Ce nodded.
�Yeah, I guess living and serving in Luo Yang, you have to address everyone in power as a Lord or such.�
Shao Kang smiled softly.
�You do. Especially if you are then picked to serve Zhang Liao, under Lu Bu.�
Sun Ce sighed.
�I have no problem with Zhang Liao. I know he�s a good warrior, with a high sense of honour and justice. Why he�s serving Lu Bu and Dong Zhuo, I�ll never know.�
Shao Kang shrugged.
�Yeah well, I respect Liao. Lu Bu and Dong Zhuo have a place reserved for them in the pit of Hell, even if I have to send them there myself!�
Sun Ce regarded the young warrior with a bemused look.
�You want to send them there yourself?�
Shao Kang nodded.
�Of course! Two �friends� of mine, members of the same unit, had accidentally let Red Hare loose, and almost lost it. Lu Bu was furious and beat them to death himself. Not even, Diao Chan, could stop him.�
Sun Ce noted the way Shao Kang spat the name of Lu Bu�s consort, and raised his eyebrow.
�Didn�t like Diao Chan, eh?�
Shao Kang frowned, and turned his gaze back over to the villagers working.
�Let�s just say� I knew her, before she was sent to the imperial court. Her �father�, was well known to me.�
Sun Ce put his hand on Shao Kang�s shoulder.
�Sorry I asked. Anyway, why don�t you go and help out. As soon as we�re done here, we�re heading back home.� He smiled �It�s fortunate that we�re so close to one of our own outposts. Heh, I bet Da Qiao is starting to worry everyone there no end.�
Shao Kang glanced at Sun Ce from the corner of his eye.
�Your wife keeping you in check, eh?�
Sun Ce paled and laughed nervously.
�Heh, heh, no, nothing like that. It�s just��
Shao Kang nodded.
�She has you wrapped around her little finger.�
�Yeah� Hey, NO!! It�s nothing��
�Like that, right?�
Sun Ce frowned.
�Ahh, let�s just hurry and help out, ok?�
Shao Kang chuckled.
�You�re the boss.�
Shao Kang turned and headed back to helping the wounded, leaving Sun Ce alone.
�Man, this guy really knows how to get someone going.� He paused and rubbed his chin �He�s rash, crazy in battle, and has no regards for his own safety in battle, if an ally is surrounded and losing. Heh, he reminds me of me!�
Sun Ce turned and headed towards some other soldiers, to check on their progress.
Shao Kang, meanwhile, while helping administer aid to the wounded, his thoughts wandered back to his younger years, living with his mother and Aunt, in the abode of Minister of the Interior, Wang Yun. Wang Yun had devised a way to tear the union of Dong Zhuo and Lu Bu apart, and it involved his �daughter�, Diao Chan. Diao Chan, in reality, was one of the household singing girls, and Wang Yun doted on her. He ignored his own two children, Shao Kang and Seung Mai, and focused on creating Diao Chan into a seductive songstress and temptress.
Even before this �plan�, he ignored the two siblings, and even their mothers. Shao Kang�s mother, was Wang Yun�s first wife, Shao Mina, while Seung Mai�s mother, Seung Hai, was Wang Yun�s second wife. Shortly after her birth, Seung Hai passed away, leaving the young girl to be raised with Shao Kang.
Shao Kang shook his head, dispelling those thoughts.
�Got to stop thinking of the past. Wherever my sister is, I�m sure she�s safe.�
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So, what do you all think? Any criticism will be received with an open mind, except any flaming comments. Depending on what sort of feedback I receive in regards to this story, I�ll post the next chapter with the next fortnight or so, so please let me know what you think.
Thank you.
Depending on how well received this story is, I may start to post my other Dynasty Warriors stories I�ve written here on FF Shrine as well. So if you like this one so far, please let me know. Anywayz, on with the story�.
************************************************** ****
DYNASTY WARRIORS � THE TIGER AND THE DRAGON
************************************************** ****
Chapter One :
The small Wu force, under the command of Sun Ce, was victorious over the much larger Shu force, led by Zhang Fei. Sun Ce himself, was elated with the victory as he leaned against the wall of a nearby hut, smiling to himself.
The damage to the small village was low, even with some of the fighting being the most fierce around the numerous buildings and civilian fatalities were nil. In Sun Ce�s eyes, it had been a very successful battle. He turned his gaze unto his men, who were assisting the villages in cleaning up whatever mess there was, strewn throughout the streets.
One of his warriors was helping a young woman tend to the wounded. It was this warrior Sun Ce was curious about the most. Shao Kang was an enigma, mystery surrounded him, ever since the first day Sun Ce and Zhou Yu had encountered the young man, during the final moments of the battle at Hu Lao Gate. At the time, the young warrior had been serving Lu Bu and Zhang Liao, and had already proven himself as a capable warrior, slaying nearly a hundred of the allied forces. It was after Dong Zhuo had fled, as did Lu Bu, Diao Chan and Zhang Liao, Shao Kang and the small troop of soliders left behind, found themselves surrounded by the allies. Cao Cao had wanted them put to death, Liu Bei was against the idea, stating that the individual now has a choice, a chance to relive his life. Yuan Shao studied Shao Kang, and looked at Sun Jian. The Wu lord nodded and Shao Kang�s life was saved. From that moment forth, he served Wu.
And now, ten months later, Sun Ce had to admit, having Shao Kang in the Wu army had been the right choice. He motioned for the young warrior to join him. Shao Kang nodded, spoke a few words to the woman he had been helping, and then approached his lord.
�Yes, Lord Sun Ce?�
Sun Ce sighed. He hated being addressed as �Lord�.
�Shao Kang, how many times, must I tell you to address me as Sun Ce. NOT �LORD�!�
Shao Kang chuckled as he brushed one of the bangs of his hair from covering his face.
�Sorry� Sun Ce. Force of habit.�
Sun Ce nodded.
�Yeah, I guess living and serving in Luo Yang, you have to address everyone in power as a Lord or such.�
Shao Kang smiled softly.
�You do. Especially if you are then picked to serve Zhang Liao, under Lu Bu.�
Sun Ce sighed.
�I have no problem with Zhang Liao. I know he�s a good warrior, with a high sense of honour and justice. Why he�s serving Lu Bu and Dong Zhuo, I�ll never know.�
Shao Kang shrugged.
�Yeah well, I respect Liao. Lu Bu and Dong Zhuo have a place reserved for them in the pit of Hell, even if I have to send them there myself!�
Sun Ce regarded the young warrior with a bemused look.
�You want to send them there yourself?�
Shao Kang nodded.
�Of course! Two �friends� of mine, members of the same unit, had accidentally let Red Hare loose, and almost lost it. Lu Bu was furious and beat them to death himself. Not even, Diao Chan, could stop him.�
Sun Ce noted the way Shao Kang spat the name of Lu Bu�s consort, and raised his eyebrow.
�Didn�t like Diao Chan, eh?�
Shao Kang frowned, and turned his gaze back over to the villagers working.
�Let�s just say� I knew her, before she was sent to the imperial court. Her �father�, was well known to me.�
Sun Ce put his hand on Shao Kang�s shoulder.
�Sorry I asked. Anyway, why don�t you go and help out. As soon as we�re done here, we�re heading back home.� He smiled �It�s fortunate that we�re so close to one of our own outposts. Heh, I bet Da Qiao is starting to worry everyone there no end.�
Shao Kang glanced at Sun Ce from the corner of his eye.
�Your wife keeping you in check, eh?�
Sun Ce paled and laughed nervously.
�Heh, heh, no, nothing like that. It�s just��
Shao Kang nodded.
�She has you wrapped around her little finger.�
�Yeah� Hey, NO!! It�s nothing��
�Like that, right?�
Sun Ce frowned.
�Ahh, let�s just hurry and help out, ok?�
Shao Kang chuckled.
�You�re the boss.�
Shao Kang turned and headed back to helping the wounded, leaving Sun Ce alone.
�Man, this guy really knows how to get someone going.� He paused and rubbed his chin �He�s rash, crazy in battle, and has no regards for his own safety in battle, if an ally is surrounded and losing. Heh, he reminds me of me!�
Sun Ce turned and headed towards some other soldiers, to check on their progress.
Shao Kang, meanwhile, while helping administer aid to the wounded, his thoughts wandered back to his younger years, living with his mother and Aunt, in the abode of Minister of the Interior, Wang Yun. Wang Yun had devised a way to tear the union of Dong Zhuo and Lu Bu apart, and it involved his �daughter�, Diao Chan. Diao Chan, in reality, was one of the household singing girls, and Wang Yun doted on her. He ignored his own two children, Shao Kang and Seung Mai, and focused on creating Diao Chan into a seductive songstress and temptress.
Even before this �plan�, he ignored the two siblings, and even their mothers. Shao Kang�s mother, was Wang Yun�s first wife, Shao Mina, while Seung Mai�s mother, Seung Hai, was Wang Yun�s second wife. Shortly after her birth, Seung Hai passed away, leaving the young girl to be raised with Shao Kang.
Shao Kang shook his head, dispelling those thoughts.
�Got to stop thinking of the past. Wherever my sister is, I�m sure she�s safe.�
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So, what do you all think? Any criticism will be received with an open mind, except any flaming comments. Depending on what sort of feedback I receive in regards to this story, I�ll post the next chapter with the next fortnight or so, so please let me know what you think.
Thank you.