Marceline
01-15-2004, 10:03 PM
strangely that a thing I so detest
the pathway to my means of comfort
sleep exists to ebb away
the word which haunts me in the waking world
rejection?
no, not quite
that would be easy
the clarity of black and white
can not shine through the haze of grey
which threatens to smother my
happiness
is juxtaposed
with this self created disbelief
and the dreams, however awful
the remedy to being torn apart

Memento Mori
01-16-2004, 02:35 AM
You and "juxtapose"

YOu still haven't lost your touch. Nice job, Mandi.

Quistis-Chan
01-16-2004, 04:39 AM
very thought provoking o_o.. I'll have to think about it longer... :)

Marceline
01-18-2004, 02:59 PM
Originally posted by Krelian
You and "juxtapose"

YOu still haven't lost your touch. Nice job, Mandi.

It's the greatest word in the English language.

It is!

Anyways, thank you. It means a lot coming from you, I know you don't token compliment. If I can get myself motivated and writing again I should have some new stuff within the week.