I wrote this 2 days after my granny died...

I will pray every night that this is all just a dream
Please let me wake up from this nightmare
I dont care if I will scream
Let me walk into her room and see her laying on her bed
let me smile at the sight and then go to her and kiss her on the head
let her wake up and say, "hey baby" and smile like she'd always do
let me hug her and say I'm sorry and say to her "I love you"
please take away her pain Lord she's still alive she's not dead
when I walk into her room she'll be laying on her bed..

November 22, 2003 1:45PM

Whoa! I'm just stunned!

That is very nice poem. My heart goes out to your "granny" :(

Hey im justing bumping this thread up to the top because dess is my baby doll, and her poetry is brilliant. Shes only 14, incredulous! I've wanted to shed a tear on more than one of her poems.