Memento Mori
11-14-2003, 04:01 PM
Celestial Valentine - 11/14/03

Dedicated to my girlfriend, Cindy

A blessed time and a year well spent
With the angel of which heaven sent
Truth becoming from eternal dreams
Loving one when sunshine gleams
Hands together create grand spectrum
Unlike my mind's imaginary addendum
Thine eyes they shine and blind mine
For you are my celestial valentine

A grand tributary of this vast ocean
Carries me to your inner-most emotion
Centered within my courageous heart
Illuminating my soul when it's too dark
A blissful cry like a Phoenix' tear
Healing scars, eliminating fear
I took the time, allowed woe to decline
For you are my celestial valentine

A kiss so sweet to addict my lips
Like a legend written in ancient Sanskrit
Your touch so pure, so genuine
Like a shot of natural adrenaline
Our bodies connect in mythical perfection
We rise to a new resurrection
And my life has now been realigned
For you are my celestial valentine

If we died, the rivers would famish
Any thoughts of heaven would tarnish
Any eternal dreams would be broken
And this mind would lay unspoken
And the Phoenix' eyes would close
And allow the rise of my woes
The sun would set and resign
End the life of my one true valentine.

ice!~neko
11-15-2003, 09:38 AM
i'm really feeling the ryming on that poem. I love the use of vocabulary.

Deja
12-10-2003, 05:11 AM
If I get a boyfriend that writes poetry as well as you do, I'm going to absolutely flip my lid :P I love your work! This poem I really like alot.

lol you are sooo intelligent ^-^;;;