Here they are. Tell me what you think please.
(may load a bit slow)
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The face was intentionaly drawn squared off(Had to draw it that way for Art class.)
http://902rap.digitallycanadian.com/gfx/tyler's sketch's.jpg
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http://902rap.digitallycanadian.com/gfx/tyler's sketch's 001.jpg
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The little container is a ink container*
http://902rap.digitallycanadian.com/gfx/tyler's sketch's 002.jpg
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http://902rap.digitallycanadian.com/gfx/tyler's sketch's 003.jpg

Keep working at it, you'll get better.

Either your scanner is a piece of shit or you draw really light! :D
My art professor in college was always on me to "draw darker". I think if you used darker more bold lines some of your stuff may look better! :)

I know when I really started concentrating and began to use more pressure on the pencil-marker-brush-whatever that my stuff really did begin to look a lot better!:)

Oh, and the pic she told me to draw darker....well, it won best of show at the State Fair so...maybe try that. It's the best advice I got for ya!;)

Good luck on future drawings!:D

Thanx for the advice man.
By the way my scanner doesn't suck, I just shrunk the pictures because they were the size of a full page and I first posted them on another forum and it actually showed the pictures in the reply without links so i made it smaller and never thought about it when posting here.