ice!~neko
10-20-2003, 05:52 PM
I wrote this a few minutes ago and thought it was pretty good. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Never Apart
All I want to do is feel close to you,
Be in your arms just one more time, never be apart�
I move closer, bringing my body against yours,
Our hands touch, interlocking like two snakes
Caught together.
I never want to leave you,
You mean too much to let go,
Nothing else matters when you�re with me.
My thoughts are deep,
And twisted,
Like vines wrapping around a single rose.
Emotions run away,
I can�t keep up.
My lips press against yours
And trace down your neck
To the top of your back.
So soft your skin
I caress.
The warmth of your kiss,
The sound of your breath,
Never be apart.
Never Apart
All I want to do is feel close to you,
Be in your arms just one more time, never be apart�
I move closer, bringing my body against yours,
Our hands touch, interlocking like two snakes
Caught together.
I never want to leave you,
You mean too much to let go,
Nothing else matters when you�re with me.
My thoughts are deep,
And twisted,
Like vines wrapping around a single rose.
Emotions run away,
I can�t keep up.
My lips press against yours
And trace down your neck
To the top of your back.
So soft your skin
I caress.
The warmth of your kiss,
The sound of your breath,
Never be apart.