RK
05-24-2003, 06:28 AM
I rewrote this story, including the prologue, 'cause I made lots of changes. Please take your time to read it and post some compliments to encourage me to write more. Enjoy your read =D
PROLOGUE
(part one)
Before the beginning of adventures, there were these creators who could make anything they pleased with their powers. The universe seemed dark and empty, so they all decided to cooperate in an experiment.
This experiment was to create four intelligent species called dragons. These four dragons had the ability to create things that never had yet existed, things like human beings. The human beings weren�t smart, but the creators found them exceptable enough to start an environment. They couldn�t live on the creators� planet for the oxygen was to hard on them, so the four dragons decided to create one big planet and they called it Zaen.
After time passed by, the humans began to multiply on Zaen in large numbers. It wasn�t long until they reached the millions. The four dragons created more creatures on the planet so the humans would have more company. The creators were fond of their four-dragon-experiment but they soon got very bored of them. Anything the four dragons did now was nothing new to the creators.
The leader of the creators, Zenna, noticed the others getting very bored. She loved the 4 dragons very much, but if it ment keeping the others satisfied, she would have to come up with a new experiment. One day, she announced a new experiment to try with. She had called it �Chronus�. The other creators knodded their heads and decided to go and finish the Chronus experiment for Zenna.
After Chronus was complete, everyone watched in wonder. Zenna had announced that Chronus was male, but none could really tell. Chronus didn�t have anything you would consider eye-popping about his looks. He was nothing but a solid-white-colored, human/dragon-body-shaped creature. It seemed as if somebody couldn�t make up their mind whether to make him the shape of a dragon or the shape of a human.
One of the creators made a gagging sound and turned their back on the disgusting thing that stood in the test-tube. Zenna gave that creator a piercing look that made them melt for she did not like anyone to call her experiments �disgusting�. Chronus suddenly opened his red, beady eyes and looked about the room at everyone, blinking rapidly. Zenna helped him out of the large test tube and walked him down into the center of the creators--they all move away from him. There was a long silence as they all examined the creature that stood in the center of them all.
As they stayed quiet, Chronus did something to break the silence. He faced his nasty face in Zenna�s direction, and suddenly changed into her. He looked exactly like her--face, hands,hair, everything. They all laughed outloud at the way Chronus had mimicked Zenna. Zenna turned angry red, and left them all to laugh.
Chronus became favored by all the creators except for Zenna. She did not like the way he acted. Zenna loved her four dragons (who had been ignored by everyone else) more than Chronus. They might have not done anything interesting, but they were much more wise and loving than that creature. More and more everyday, Chronus was starting to look more human than deformed. Zenna found it quite odd, because he was supposed to stay the way he looked. Maybe the others were adding on more touch to him? She gritted her teeth just thinking that. Chronus was fine the way he was; he didn�t have to get any worse.
Zenna walked down to the lab one day and as soon as she opened the doors, she saw twenty seven of the creators surrounding Chronus who was laying on a bed, body covered with sheets. His face looked so much like a human�s. He had everything on his face that was required to look like one: A nose, two eyes, a mouth, etc., except for his ears..they were horns. Zenna yelled at the twenty-seven who sewed up the last stitch on Chronus�s face. How could they just make Chronus into a human without her permission?
She pushed the creators out of the way and removed the sheets from Chronus�s body. They had equipped him with metal armor, from neck to toe. His body was just like a human man�s. They put black tattoos on his face and gave him ankle-length black hair which complimented his pale skin. Chronus opened his eyes and they appeared the same as always; beady red. Zenna turned around slowly and gave each of the creators a glare. �You ruined him.� Zenna left the lab and went to her lounge.
As time sped by even faster, Chronus could talk completely like a human being, but couldn�t think like a human being. He still had his same powers, just that his appearance was different. Zenna had been in the four-dragon�s communication room, where she communicated with them. While she was talking to them, Chronus was watching her from afar in the shadows near one of the iron stair cases. His eyes glowed red as jealousy rised within him. He had noticed that Zenna, leader of all creators, favored the four dragons more than him. He then left the communications center and went to the room he was given to.
About a few days later, someone had reported to Senna that they had witnessed some sort of creatures evolving on the four dragons� planet Zaen. Zenna ran to the communication center and took a peek. There, on the holographic screen, she saw all kinds of savage looking beasts running about, attacking then eating mammals and evolving into halflings of whatever they ate(example: dragon eat human= dragon-human. alligator eat squirrel= alligator squirrel. etc.etc.) .
One of the creators pointed out to Zenna that the four dragons had obviously screwed around with their world and went insane. Zenna lowered her head, depressed that the one experiment she had ever loved turned into a failure. There was no choice but to seal the dragons up. The creators made an arc on the planet Zaen, and placed it inside the largest mountain. They then sealed the 4 dragons in a stone and sealed that stone in the arc. They called these arcs �Goddess of the Arc�. The name had no particular meaning, they just liked the sound of it. Zenna cried her guts out while laying in her lounge. She couldn�t believe the dragons would do such a thing.
Zenna was on her way to the testing Lab, and on her way, she was horrified at the thing she saw--the mutilated body of a creator. She quickened her pace and walked down the halways, seeing more and more mutilated bodies as she went. She kept running until she reached the double doors to the laboratory. She clamped a man over her mouth and leaned up against one of the test tubes. The place seemed so quiet and lonely. Zenna began to think to herself about the 4 dragons. They were wonderful creatures and never did any harm. If only the other creators hadn�t gone against them.
Being interrupted from her thoughts, Zenna suddenly heard a loud cry coming from somewhere. �Ahhhhh!! CHRONUS!� The name Chronus right away explained the dead bodies in the hallways. Zenna tightened her fists and punched a test tube with all her might, putting a crack in it. Chronus, the one everyone loved so dear, was the true failed experiment. He must have put the savage beasts on the 4 dragon�s planet because he was jealous-- not satisfied with the attention he already had.
Zenna began to think. If Chronus could kill the creators that killed him, he was bound to be very powerful. Zenna knew it was a mistake to give him the body of a human. There was only room for one experiment, and that was the dragons. Zenna heard the foot steps of Chronus coming closer and closer. Her heart skipped several beats in a row. She did not want to get killed by that beast. The only thing she could do was one thing--and that was to create the ultimate creation by using every last drop of her powers. When Zenna was born, she remembered a voice telling her that she would create a community of powerful beings at the edge of her death, and to her surprise, that is exactly how things ended up to be.
Chronus was now inside the same room as Zenna, looking dark and evil. His eyes glowed bright red as blood covered his mouth. Zenna lifted her arms up in the air, and closed her eyes. A blue orb shined from her body, burning through the eyes of Chronus. Chronus covered his eyes, yelling. He charged towards Zenna, trying to cut through, but by the time he got to her, it was too late to stop anything. Three orbs flew from her body and went towards the planet Zaen. Chronus screamed in rage, unsatisfied because he couldn�t kill her for she was already dead. His eyes moved towards the holographic figure of the planet Zaen on a screened window. �Thou has left thee some power.� He gritted his bloody teeth and dissapeared in thin air.
Just so you know what's going on, Zenna just made the 3 different types of super beings with the last drop of her energy, and then she died. Chronus dissapears and goes to Zaen. He wants Zenna's powers, so he's gonna try to drain the orbs into his body. He's basically just a monster that has a big appetite. His main target is the Goddess of the Arc, because the 4 dragons is the main reason why he went wrong.
PROLOGUE
(part one)
Before the beginning of adventures, there were these creators who could make anything they pleased with their powers. The universe seemed dark and empty, so they all decided to cooperate in an experiment.
This experiment was to create four intelligent species called dragons. These four dragons had the ability to create things that never had yet existed, things like human beings. The human beings weren�t smart, but the creators found them exceptable enough to start an environment. They couldn�t live on the creators� planet for the oxygen was to hard on them, so the four dragons decided to create one big planet and they called it Zaen.
After time passed by, the humans began to multiply on Zaen in large numbers. It wasn�t long until they reached the millions. The four dragons created more creatures on the planet so the humans would have more company. The creators were fond of their four-dragon-experiment but they soon got very bored of them. Anything the four dragons did now was nothing new to the creators.
The leader of the creators, Zenna, noticed the others getting very bored. She loved the 4 dragons very much, but if it ment keeping the others satisfied, she would have to come up with a new experiment. One day, she announced a new experiment to try with. She had called it �Chronus�. The other creators knodded their heads and decided to go and finish the Chronus experiment for Zenna.
After Chronus was complete, everyone watched in wonder. Zenna had announced that Chronus was male, but none could really tell. Chronus didn�t have anything you would consider eye-popping about his looks. He was nothing but a solid-white-colored, human/dragon-body-shaped creature. It seemed as if somebody couldn�t make up their mind whether to make him the shape of a dragon or the shape of a human.
One of the creators made a gagging sound and turned their back on the disgusting thing that stood in the test-tube. Zenna gave that creator a piercing look that made them melt for she did not like anyone to call her experiments �disgusting�. Chronus suddenly opened his red, beady eyes and looked about the room at everyone, blinking rapidly. Zenna helped him out of the large test tube and walked him down into the center of the creators--they all move away from him. There was a long silence as they all examined the creature that stood in the center of them all.
As they stayed quiet, Chronus did something to break the silence. He faced his nasty face in Zenna�s direction, and suddenly changed into her. He looked exactly like her--face, hands,hair, everything. They all laughed outloud at the way Chronus had mimicked Zenna. Zenna turned angry red, and left them all to laugh.
Chronus became favored by all the creators except for Zenna. She did not like the way he acted. Zenna loved her four dragons (who had been ignored by everyone else) more than Chronus. They might have not done anything interesting, but they were much more wise and loving than that creature. More and more everyday, Chronus was starting to look more human than deformed. Zenna found it quite odd, because he was supposed to stay the way he looked. Maybe the others were adding on more touch to him? She gritted her teeth just thinking that. Chronus was fine the way he was; he didn�t have to get any worse.
Zenna walked down to the lab one day and as soon as she opened the doors, she saw twenty seven of the creators surrounding Chronus who was laying on a bed, body covered with sheets. His face looked so much like a human�s. He had everything on his face that was required to look like one: A nose, two eyes, a mouth, etc., except for his ears..they were horns. Zenna yelled at the twenty-seven who sewed up the last stitch on Chronus�s face. How could they just make Chronus into a human without her permission?
She pushed the creators out of the way and removed the sheets from Chronus�s body. They had equipped him with metal armor, from neck to toe. His body was just like a human man�s. They put black tattoos on his face and gave him ankle-length black hair which complimented his pale skin. Chronus opened his eyes and they appeared the same as always; beady red. Zenna turned around slowly and gave each of the creators a glare. �You ruined him.� Zenna left the lab and went to her lounge.
As time sped by even faster, Chronus could talk completely like a human being, but couldn�t think like a human being. He still had his same powers, just that his appearance was different. Zenna had been in the four-dragon�s communication room, where she communicated with them. While she was talking to them, Chronus was watching her from afar in the shadows near one of the iron stair cases. His eyes glowed red as jealousy rised within him. He had noticed that Zenna, leader of all creators, favored the four dragons more than him. He then left the communications center and went to the room he was given to.
About a few days later, someone had reported to Senna that they had witnessed some sort of creatures evolving on the four dragons� planet Zaen. Zenna ran to the communication center and took a peek. There, on the holographic screen, she saw all kinds of savage looking beasts running about, attacking then eating mammals and evolving into halflings of whatever they ate(example: dragon eat human= dragon-human. alligator eat squirrel= alligator squirrel. etc.etc.) .
One of the creators pointed out to Zenna that the four dragons had obviously screwed around with their world and went insane. Zenna lowered her head, depressed that the one experiment she had ever loved turned into a failure. There was no choice but to seal the dragons up. The creators made an arc on the planet Zaen, and placed it inside the largest mountain. They then sealed the 4 dragons in a stone and sealed that stone in the arc. They called these arcs �Goddess of the Arc�. The name had no particular meaning, they just liked the sound of it. Zenna cried her guts out while laying in her lounge. She couldn�t believe the dragons would do such a thing.
Zenna was on her way to the testing Lab, and on her way, she was horrified at the thing she saw--the mutilated body of a creator. She quickened her pace and walked down the halways, seeing more and more mutilated bodies as she went. She kept running until she reached the double doors to the laboratory. She clamped a man over her mouth and leaned up against one of the test tubes. The place seemed so quiet and lonely. Zenna began to think to herself about the 4 dragons. They were wonderful creatures and never did any harm. If only the other creators hadn�t gone against them.
Being interrupted from her thoughts, Zenna suddenly heard a loud cry coming from somewhere. �Ahhhhh!! CHRONUS!� The name Chronus right away explained the dead bodies in the hallways. Zenna tightened her fists and punched a test tube with all her might, putting a crack in it. Chronus, the one everyone loved so dear, was the true failed experiment. He must have put the savage beasts on the 4 dragon�s planet because he was jealous-- not satisfied with the attention he already had.
Zenna began to think. If Chronus could kill the creators that killed him, he was bound to be very powerful. Zenna knew it was a mistake to give him the body of a human. There was only room for one experiment, and that was the dragons. Zenna heard the foot steps of Chronus coming closer and closer. Her heart skipped several beats in a row. She did not want to get killed by that beast. The only thing she could do was one thing--and that was to create the ultimate creation by using every last drop of her powers. When Zenna was born, she remembered a voice telling her that she would create a community of powerful beings at the edge of her death, and to her surprise, that is exactly how things ended up to be.
Chronus was now inside the same room as Zenna, looking dark and evil. His eyes glowed bright red as blood covered his mouth. Zenna lifted her arms up in the air, and closed her eyes. A blue orb shined from her body, burning through the eyes of Chronus. Chronus covered his eyes, yelling. He charged towards Zenna, trying to cut through, but by the time he got to her, it was too late to stop anything. Three orbs flew from her body and went towards the planet Zaen. Chronus screamed in rage, unsatisfied because he couldn�t kill her for she was already dead. His eyes moved towards the holographic figure of the planet Zaen on a screened window. �Thou has left thee some power.� He gritted his bloody teeth and dissapeared in thin air.
Just so you know what's going on, Zenna just made the 3 different types of super beings with the last drop of her energy, and then she died. Chronus dissapears and goes to Zaen. He wants Zenna's powers, so he's gonna try to drain the orbs into his body. He's basically just a monster that has a big appetite. His main target is the Goddess of the Arc, because the 4 dragons is the main reason why he went wrong.